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Re: Fern - Haiku
Anonymous
28th Aug 2014 6:47pm
Miss Chi,
A fragil and moist feast for the mind!
tornado
A fragil and moist feast for the mind!
tornado

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Re: Fern - Haiku
28th Aug 2014 6:56pm
re: Re: Fern - Haiku
28th Aug 2014 9:21pm
Re: Fern - Haiku
Anonymous
28th Aug 2014 6:56pm
A very vivid image, fresh like dawn!

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re: Re: Fern - Haiku
28th Aug 2014 9:22pm
Re: Fern - Haiku
28th Aug 2014 6:57pm
re: Re: Fern - Haiku
28th Aug 2014 9:23pm
Re: Fern - Haiku
28th Aug 2014 7:59pm
re: Re: Fern - Haiku
28th Aug 2014 9:26pm
Thank you so much, JeJe! You're sweet. But I wouldn't say that since there are so many gems on DU!
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28th Aug 2014 9:48pm
Re: Fern - Haiku
28th Aug 2014 9:08pm
re: Re: Fern - Haiku
28th Aug 2014 9:29pm
You've got me :-). I felt like a gardener today and had to put that into words :-). Thanks a lot, LSP!
Re: Fern - Haiku
28th Aug 2014 11:00pm
would stand out in any
collection of haiku as
a perfect example of
the form...
collection of haiku as
a perfect example of
the form...
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re: Re: Fern - Haiku
29th Aug 2014 5:26pm
Humbled by your lovely and touching words, dear Paul, since we all know what gems your own poems are and how much they mean to your smitten admirers (READ THEM!!!). Thank you!
Re: Fern - Haiku
28th Aug 2014 11:35pm
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29th Aug 2014 5:28pm
Re: Fern - Haiku
29th Aug 2014 1:32am
You do display mastery over these short forms my sweetness, can't believe how you draw me into these
all the time :)
all the time :)
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re: Re: Fern - Haiku
29th Aug 2014 5:30pm
That's a compliment that really wows me! Thank you, dear Poe! So glad you came to love my shorties!
Re: Fern - Haiku
29th Aug 2014 5:58am
Chiyo, luv :-* ~
All I can think of when I read this is my mouth drenched with the dew from this fern... ;-*
All I can think of when I read this is my mouth drenched with the dew from this fern... ;-*
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re: Re: Fern - Haiku
29th Aug 2014 5:33pm
Tastes sweet hopefully! Your image has something refreshing. Thanks, dear Savaja!
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29th Aug 2014 7:50pm
Fragrant, verdant greenery redolent of sunshine and refreshing crisp-tenderness...
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Re: Fern - Haiku
29th Aug 2014 6:27am
re: Re: Fern - Haiku
I love ferns. They are so lovely in their airiness and they smell like summer incarnate. Glad they remind you of the place where you live.
re: Re: Fern - Haiku
31st Aug 2014 1:40pm
Re: Fern - Haiku
31st Aug 2014 3:05pm
This is a peaceful reminiscence of my days among the mighty redwoods in California. Where the forest floor is replete with beautiful ferns...their brown, coiled tendrils reaching for the filtered sunlight.
Thank you for the memory.
Thank you for the memory.
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re: Re: Fern - Haiku
31st Aug 2014 8:35pm
You're very welcome! I'm glad that one of my "shorties" reminded of a landscape where you seemingly felt happy some day! Your second sentence is a poem by itself. Lovely ...
Re: Fern - Haiku
Anonymous
31st Aug 2014 8:30pm
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re: Re: Fern - Haiku
31st Aug 2014 8:38pm
And your comment is music to my ears, Gabriel. Always glad about your visit!
Let me see ... that one today :-)
♡´・ᴗ・`♡
Let me see ... that one today :-)
♡´・ᴗ・`♡