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Gothic Gundown (w/ JohnFeddeler)
Hate darkens with unknown lust
executing as disillusioned trust.
Humiliation in words suffocate
while dirty wars manipulate.
the Reaper in a poncho, a masked gunslinger
black liquid sorrow, steady trigger finger
we ran like bandits, shameless & naked
laid to rest on a canopied bed... [/font]
Published 28th Aug 2014
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28th Aug 2014 7:15pm
a little adventure in a dismal border town. I enjoyed our gothic western theme in this...
28th Aug 2014 8:38pm
made me think of angry sex with a Mexican... not a bad mental image :)
enjoyed this a lot...
keep making collabs... you work well together:)
enjoyed this a lot...
keep making collabs... you work well together:)
29th Aug 2014 2:17am
Angry sex with a Mexican, Hahaha... Ah man, I about died laughing reading that one, hehehe, an YES, not a bad mental image, o.0 ... This write however, it is very interesting... Can read into this different stories every time that look at it, am going to favorite this, almost feels like a Once Upon a time in Mexico theme here, very right on friend... wolf/ Eddie
29th Aug 2014 2:36pm
28th Sep 2014 4:53am
Wow great shorty girl.a long story made into a little riff.wow i never thought i could here or read a long story so quick.What kind of poem is this?
28th Sep 2014 4:53am
Wow great shorty girl.a long story made into a little riff.wow i never thought i could here or read a long story so quick.What kind of poem is this?
