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Wings of Spikes
Once black velvet wings
Now weighted stubs remain
Of a shattered heart
Wrapped in prickly thorns
The Dark Angel will fly never more
Her toes rooting to Hell
Grounding her blackened soul
On the outer banks of Styx
The heart she vowed to protect
With all of her existence
Released their hold mid flight
Destroying her heart
With each finger lifted
An ebony quill fell
Causing her to descend
Into an uncontrollable tailspin
The clouds opened up
Amethyst lighting shot
A lion's roar of thunder burst
As tears of blood fell to earth
In failing desperation
She reached out for his hand
Flapping and flailing her thorny tips
Only to shred her ivory skin
All hope was lost
As barbs began to spread
Her once exquisite body
Began to fade away
The only remaining sign of her inner beauty
Are the berries
On which you feast
Found deep in the dark forest
Angels who dare to love
Yet have it stripped away
Remain forever delivering sustenance
Feeding multitudes her fruit
Now weighted stubs remain
Of a shattered heart
Wrapped in prickly thorns
The Dark Angel will fly never more
Her toes rooting to Hell
Grounding her blackened soul
On the outer banks of Styx
The heart she vowed to protect
With all of her existence
Released their hold mid flight
Destroying her heart
With each finger lifted
An ebony quill fell
Causing her to descend
Into an uncontrollable tailspin
The clouds opened up
Amethyst lighting shot
A lion's roar of thunder burst
As tears of blood fell to earth
In failing desperation
She reached out for his hand
Flapping and flailing her thorny tips
Only to shred her ivory skin
All hope was lost
As barbs began to spread
Her once exquisite body
Began to fade away
The only remaining sign of her inner beauty
Are the berries
On which you feast
Found deep in the dark forest
Angels who dare to love
Yet have it stripped away
Remain forever delivering sustenance
Feeding multitudes her fruit
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Re: Wings of Spikes
Anonymous
26th Aug 2014 5:59pm
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re: Re: Wings of Spikes
26th Aug 2014 7:31pm
Its about loss....
Friendships...loves...
Any n all loss hun.
Especially at the hands of those making assumptions
Thanx for the awesome comment
Friendships...loves...
Any n all loss hun.
Especially at the hands of those making assumptions
Thanx for the awesome comment
Re: Wings of Spikes
26th Aug 2014 6:11pm
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27th Aug 2014 8:07pm
Re: Wings of Spikes
26th Aug 2014 6:39pm
Within the trails of love, lust, heartbreak and truth... That is when our true inner self reveals so much more easily...
Angels who dare to love
Yet have it stripped away
Remain forever delivering sustenance
Feeding multitudes her fruit
You will find others in which to feed and feed upon beautiful write!
Angels who dare to love
Yet have it stripped away
Remain forever delivering sustenance
Feeding multitudes her fruit
You will find others in which to feed and feed upon beautiful write!
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re: Re: Wings of Spikes
27th Aug 2014 8:08pm
Re: Wings of Spikes
26th Aug 2014 7:08pm
re: Re: Wings of Spikes
27th Aug 2014 8:10pm
Could there b a more sad creature to watch wither up n die?
Thanx for giving it a read hun?
Thanx for giving it a read hun?
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26th Aug 2014 11:46pm
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27th Aug 2014 2:29am
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Re: Wings of Spikes
27th Aug 2014 2:30am
I've literally fallen in love with your poetry!Wow!You are Definately creative.
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re: Re: Wings of Spikes
27th Aug 2014 8:20pm
Well POP u have figured out how to make this lil grl blush.
Ty for such kindness
Ty for such kindness
Re: Wings of Spikes
27th Aug 2014 3:54pm
Awesome story, the ending was epic!
N that nice ass in the pic. Is WOW lol
N that nice ass in the pic. Is WOW lol
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re: Re: Wings of Spikes
27th Aug 2014 8:21pm
Re: Wings of Spikes
Anonymous
28th Aug 2014 5:48pm
Belle,
Sometimes after plucking the white ones, you find much darkness beneath ;-) Enjoyed!
tornado
Sometimes after plucking the white ones, you find much darkness beneath ;-) Enjoyed!
tornado
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Re: Wings of Spikes
29th Aug 2014 2:14am
Soul be taken
Heart be stolen
Blackness take hold
of an angels heaven
Taer her down
Hands left holding only tears
Of what's left of her
And her cares
Behold this beauty
And her inner warrior
You have just awakened the lion
And the rebirth
Of A warrior Angel
Heart be stolen
Blackness take hold
of an angels heaven
Taer her down
Hands left holding only tears
Of what's left of her
And her cares
Behold this beauty
And her inner warrior
You have just awakened the lion
And the rebirth
Of A warrior Angel
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