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An Old Flame
it surprises you
how it's always
been there--
riotous, yet
self-contained
in a little room
all its own,
ruling, though not
conflagrating,
exact all this
time in its
longing pulse
its somehow
regardful protective
heat
as though one day
you fooled yourself
and shut the door open
how it's always
been there--
riotous, yet
self-contained
in a little room
all its own,
ruling, though not
conflagrating,
exact all this
time in its
longing pulse
its somehow
regardful protective
heat
as though one day
you fooled yourself
and shut the door open
Published 24th Aug 2014
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26th Aug 2014 6:53am
Candycrier, luv! :-*
This is marvelous! What an incredibly apt and perfect way to describe a lingering tendre for someone loved... :-*
You have such a way with words, luv! :-*
I especially adore:
Oh! All of this! I cannot pick just one or two phrases. It is quite marvelous, luv. :-*
This is marvelous! What an incredibly apt and perfect way to describe a lingering tendre for someone loved... :-*
You have such a way with words, luv! :-*
I especially adore:
Oh! All of this! I cannot pick just one or two phrases. It is quite marvelous, luv. :-*
26th Aug 2014 3:19pm
Thank you so much for this most generous comment and for the addition to your RL.
11th Nov 2015 8:25pm
12th Nov 2015 00:25am
Thank you for your comment.
I read your two haiku. Unquestionably talented. Good to meet you!
I read your two haiku. Unquestionably talented. Good to meet you!
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