Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
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26th Aug 2014 4:55am
excellently using readers' feelings to make the end of this poem. if one felt nothing about losing someone, it wouldn't matter to them, but for those with the experience or the thought of losing someone, it has affect.
26th Aug 2014 10:55pm
I often rely, it's true, on a reader
or two who might be
receptive to the
situation...
