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Reality is eventual
The answer is in the light
Without dark
Light is not true
The beauty of
A diamond is
Not seen
Without alot
Of refinment
If u cant be bothred
To do the work
U belong in the
Dirt unfound
Uncut
Unpolished
If u cant do the work
How can you expect
Anywone elts to
See you for what
Could posibly be
Without dark
Light is not true
The beauty of
A diamond is
Not seen
Without alot
Of refinment
If u cant be bothred
To do the work
U belong in the
Dirt unfound
Uncut
Unpolished
If u cant do the work
How can you expect
Anywone elts to
See you for what
Could posibly be
Published 24th Aug 2014
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Anonymous
24th Aug 2014 00:43am
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24th Aug 2014 1:27am
14th Sep 2014 6:33am
Waterviolet, luv :-* ~
This is such a profound poem. Your imagery is so strong and clear and evocative. :-*
"The answer is in the light." - Such a pure thing, that, and simultaneously simple, yet so, incredibly difficult betimes, luv... :-*
There are technical things I can assist with, if you'd like: message me if you wish. If not, no worries, and please know, I am an automatic proofreader, even do it to the newspaper. :-p
This poem, though, is quite magnificent, luv.
This is such a profound poem. Your imagery is so strong and clear and evocative. :-*
"The answer is in the light." - Such a pure thing, that, and simultaneously simple, yet so, incredibly difficult betimes, luv... :-*
There are technical things I can assist with, if you'd like: message me if you wish. If not, no worries, and please know, I am an automatic proofreader, even do it to the newspaper. :-p
This poem, though, is quite magnificent, luv.
