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Vengeance
Vengeance. The all consuming word.
Will free my soul and feed my nerve.
Laced with hate and poison this dish I serve.
I lie in wait, repulsed I watch you smile,
your blood still flows, I feel the bile,
rise up my throat. I wait a while.
Now you're alone beneath the dark moon,
my steps to you, they come too soon,
Your mind has no time to attune.
You kiss the ground, cold, hard and red,
Forgetting again the words once said,
Goodnight my love, it's time for bed.
Will free my soul and feed my nerve.
Laced with hate and poison this dish I serve.
I lie in wait, repulsed I watch you smile,
your blood still flows, I feel the bile,
rise up my throat. I wait a while.
Now you're alone beneath the dark moon,
my steps to you, they come too soon,
Your mind has no time to attune.
You kiss the ground, cold, hard and red,
Forgetting again the words once said,
Goodnight my love, it's time for bed.
Published 30th Oct 2009
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Anonymous
31st Oct 2009 00:17am
Beyond amazing. Perfectly achieves the level of darkness and sombre reflection that I myself often strive for.
Anonymous
31st Oct 2009 7:33am
Stark,ominous like the glint of a knife aimed at ur throat!very well written!
31st Oct 2009 9:52am
Very dark...You did total justice to the title I feel...Couldn't have written in a better way...
"Laced with hate and poison this dish i serve".....I love this line in particular!
31st Oct 2009 10:40am
Wow, thank you so much. It means a great deal to read your positive comments.
31st Oct 2009 4:16pm
I'm not usually keen on rhyme, but it's used so effectively here that you've changed my mind. I relly like it.
18th Nov 2009 8:20pm
add some more in here, sure you have some more to share, sorry I dont write propper english, but try to give back a little :)
