I've Given up on you

Well written, sorry you are going thru this.

Thank you Amazon

Damn this is very powerful and honest
Very relatable
It sounds very depressing but I'm comftorable with that
Awesome
The imagery is crazy

thank you Brandon

I do hope you didn't take all the credit for this. Starting from "Dark are the thoughts..." To the end are yours. The rest if from a legit song called "Say something"

Now onto YOUR part of this, It does give rather good imagery, but, considering you're adding on to the original song, it would have been nice to see something that fits a little more with it.  
             ~Kye The Kitsune

No the credit is all with the original scribe but the song fits perfectly with whats happening in my life right now as does the ending which makes a perfect fit to my effort Thankyou for your input

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VVgixOjGhVU
 
you should add name of the original author under the poem. Copying another artist's work without his/her permission is copyright violation. Doesn't matter if you've added to it; you have to name credit. Here it's considered plagiarism. If you look at the DUP message before you click "submit 'poem", it states "submit your own original writing.

Something? I like!

Thank you Spanker kind Sir

HollyDove is right...cyberqueenz4, please delete this poem on your own free will before you suffer the embarassment of being tagged as a plagiarist.
It's OK to quote a line or two from an original composition, but you did completely the opposite. Even then, you still either italicized or put inside quotation marks your quoted lines. Hope we are clear on this. Thank you!

EngrVV

As requested i have edited the piece which by the way i never claimed was mine but understand the rules so calm down everyone i have sorted it out

Thank you...once you published a poem in your wall, you claim that as your own automatically, not unless you give credit to whom credit is due.

Thank you i shall remember if i am ever tempted to use another' s song lyrics again Smiles

First off everyone - chill the hell out.  This is a place for people to express their thoughts and feelings without being chastised.  Yes, credit given where due - we don't need to get OTT on it.  This poet is coming into her own and she's learning. Instead of nailing her to a cross, let's educate and help her.

Well thank you for standing up for me...Feels good to know someone has your back !! Smiles