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Tree of Life
His body is strong like the mighty oak
But bends as the willow, his spirit never broke
His arms reach like branches to the heavens
Touching and embracing the world as we know
His care, like leaves, providing a canopy of safety;
Where love can unquestionably grow
His heart and mind run deep like vital roots in the earth
Expanding, growing and welcoming; life’s ever connected rebirth
His knowledge, like seeds, spread in the breeze; whether in light or dark
Give opportunity for new pathways of growth within my heart
He is new life and old, combined by nature’s perfect harmony
He is the One who truly sees, understands, and nourishes me.
**** this is your hint Sunshine :):):) I couldn't resist ;)
But bends as the willow, his spirit never broke
His arms reach like branches to the heavens
Touching and embracing the world as we know
His care, like leaves, providing a canopy of safety;
Where love can unquestionably grow
His heart and mind run deep like vital roots in the earth
Expanding, growing and welcoming; life’s ever connected rebirth
His knowledge, like seeds, spread in the breeze; whether in light or dark
Give opportunity for new pathways of growth within my heart
He is new life and old, combined by nature’s perfect harmony
He is the One who truly sees, understands, and nourishes me.
**** this is your hint Sunshine :):):) I couldn't resist ;)
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Re: Tree of Life
20th Aug 2014 11:58pm
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21st Aug 2014 7:19pm
Thank you kindly whale... I am made most happy by your glowing comment...and I am honored by the RL add. with much respect..domore
Re: Tree of Life
21st Aug 2014 9:10am
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21st Aug 2014 7:21pm
Beautiful kat.. it is your kind spirit which is "tres belle" thank you for reading and commenting dear friend.. with love and respect..xoxo domore
Re: Tree of Life
25th Aug 2014 1:32am
Glad you couldn't resist to share this with your "Sunshine" and us. Beautiful and breath taking as always. Luv and hugs your way. Xo :)
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re: Re: Tree of Life
26th Aug 2014 7:46pm
Thank you ever so much Lovely Flower... love and hugs sent back your way.. you never fail to be a supportive friend.. wonderful spirit that you freely share.. I count myself lucky indeed. xoxo domore
re: Re: Tree of Life
26th Aug 2014 7:47pm
Indeed Sir Hash :) Thank you for stopping in a takin a gander at this ink.. you honor me by your presence. with much respect.. domore
Re: Tree of Life
27th Aug 2014 1:48am
What a beautifully assembled hint for
a very fortunate man.
Dear Lady, your lovely mind and spirit
provide constant inspiration, shining through
your talent and ability to share the written word.
xoxo
YFLH
a very fortunate man.
Dear Lady, your lovely mind and spirit
provide constant inspiration, shining through
your talent and ability to share the written word.
xoxo
YFLH
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re: Re: Tree of Life
28th Aug 2014 10:02pm
:) Dear Man.. you humble me with your lovely comment.. I am ever grateful for you.. and your insight...you move me always.. with love and respect.. xoxoxo YGLL
Re: Tree of Life
5th Sep 2014 3:22pm
Domore2014, luv :-* ~
This is truly, quite a remarkable poem. I am enlightened and see with clarity, miraculous, luv. :-*
What outstanding metaphor you employ and this interweaving of the Tree of Life with imagery of your man of strength, in so very many ways, is flawlessly executed, luv. :-*
Thank you for sharing such ineffable sweetness with us!
This is truly, quite a remarkable poem. I am enlightened and see with clarity, miraculous, luv. :-*
What outstanding metaphor you employ and this interweaving of the Tree of Life with imagery of your man of strength, in so very many ways, is flawlessly executed, luv. :-*
Thank you for sharing such ineffable sweetness with us!
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re: Re: Tree of Life
8th Sep 2014 5:21pm
Thank you Savaja.. You are far too kind with your comment.. and I love it!!! I am so very happy that you graced my page for a lil reading pleasure.. with much respect..xoxo domore
Re: Tree of Life
11th Oct 2014 10:09pm