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I made my choice
I made my choice:
I am in love: I will always be in love… I do not own my heart… any longer
I had given it away… to another
I choose the sea to be my lover… I love him, and he loves me: so much deeper
With a strong hand of: push and pull
I will never get bored, or be let down by you… with love wet and all over my skin
Made for passion, that drowned in
Just the right mixture: of safety and danger
With a hidden current to surprise me with laughter
The undertow: takes me with a promise of disaster… I am breathless, with the pleasures of rapture
All the others: who live within the realms, of the deep?
I sat and watched: and thought long, just listening
This morning before the dusk of dawn: in the dark, under the moon… I felt my soul, making love to you
My heart is not far: I was surprised to see
He answer and said he was here with me: this gave me comfort… a clam and peace, I made love to the- ocean… and the sea made love, to me
I made my choice: I choose no-one, because no-one can choose me
My soul is not here: but out there in the sea
All I have to offer: is a body at best
Why give it away: for just moments of lust… I need more
I rather fight: in this passionate dance… of love
Lust and sand lingers all over my body
I am ravished, and beaten… gently caressed, and passionately touched
Exhausted and breathless… from the intense, erotic pleasure: I have become accustomed too
Lovingly spoiled, I am taken: to new heights… whenever I want to
I am one with him: he is one with me
Sensually I call to him my lover: tyrant named sea
Lori
I am in love: I will always be in love… I do not own my heart… any longer
I had given it away… to another
I choose the sea to be my lover… I love him, and he loves me: so much deeper
With a strong hand of: push and pull
I will never get bored, or be let down by you… with love wet and all over my skin
Made for passion, that drowned in
Just the right mixture: of safety and danger
With a hidden current to surprise me with laughter
The undertow: takes me with a promise of disaster… I am breathless, with the pleasures of rapture
All the others: who live within the realms, of the deep?
I sat and watched: and thought long, just listening
This morning before the dusk of dawn: in the dark, under the moon… I felt my soul, making love to you
My heart is not far: I was surprised to see
He answer and said he was here with me: this gave me comfort… a clam and peace, I made love to the- ocean… and the sea made love, to me
I made my choice: I choose no-one, because no-one can choose me
My soul is not here: but out there in the sea
All I have to offer: is a body at best
Why give it away: for just moments of lust… I need more
I rather fight: in this passionate dance… of love
Lust and sand lingers all over my body
I am ravished, and beaten… gently caressed, and passionately touched
Exhausted and breathless… from the intense, erotic pleasure: I have become accustomed too
Lovingly spoiled, I am taken: to new heights… whenever I want to
I am one with him: he is one with me
Sensually I call to him my lover: tyrant named sea
Lori
Published 19th Aug 2014
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19th Aug 2014 6:13pm
A most beautiful love poem. I can relate to the depths of this metaphoric masterwork......
.....all things considered, I wish you well : )
One of your best thus far
.....all things considered, I wish you well : )
One of your best thus far
20th Aug 2014 11:22am
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20th Aug 2014 2:20am
A masterwork, you are becoming the P.E.
I foreseen you to be. Salty as the wild sea.
Keep on swim-min, you please me.
LUVYA This one is GOOD
I foreseen you to be. Salty as the wild sea.
Keep on swim-min, you please me.
LUVYA This one is GOOD
20th Aug 2014 11:21am
