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Baby Whale. Serynu
Water ripples by
deep down the whale sounds its cries
it has lost its way.
deep down the whale sounds its cries
it has lost its way.
Published 19th Aug 2014
| Edited 1st Jun 2017
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19th Aug 2014 3:42am
Broomieeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!
Excellent Serynu -Those things are addictive!!!
Excellent Serynu -Those things are addictive!!!
19th Aug 2014 3:43am
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19th Aug 2014 7:01pm
Hello Mar, how are you? It is always nice to see in my poetic corner. Yes whales are my favourite sea creatures for many reasons! Thanks for the read!!!
Hugs
Jackie
Hugs
Jackie
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6th Mar 2016 8:39pm
...the whale was sad 'cause ahab had lost his way and they could no longer play hide & seek
18th Jun 2017 4:10am
