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A Moons Parting
A Moons Parting
As she pulls away gently
taking pieces of me, evolving resolve
like little tin foil presents wrapped
in faded red crushed velvet bows
A child forgiven, a man redeemed
I have made my own wellness
out of love and an early morning smile
I walk into a brand new life
Those that choose death and dying
do not choose to live- you’re pain is valid
learning from it, more so.
I’m not here to take from you…
Only to give a better life, and she cleansed me.
As she pulls away gently
taking pieces of me, evolving resolve
like little tin foil presents wrapped
in faded red crushed velvet bows
A child forgiven, a man redeemed
I have made my own wellness
out of love and an early morning smile
I walk into a brand new life
Those that choose death and dying
do not choose to live- you’re pain is valid
learning from it, more so.
I’m not here to take from you…
Only to give a better life, and she cleansed me.
Published 13th Aug 2014
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- Edited 14th Aug 2014 00:34am
13th Aug 2014 11:37pm
I did hear once that all we need is love ;) and someone who believed in us and accepted all our perfections and imperfections. Lucky is the man/woman who has found that even once in their lifetime.
This poem tells me you are that man who has found all that and more :)
This poem tells me you are that man who has found all that and more :)
14th Aug 2014 3:04am
My big pirate self just blushed. Way to go, you.
:-D
I wrote that on first morning of super moon... This is a prayer I made for finishing this lunar cycle and letting go of old hurts and forgiving myself.
The next part of that ritual is making positive plans and moves towards the life I want to have.
Umm... it's working REALLY well...
Thank you, Rina
:-D
I wrote that on first morning of super moon... This is a prayer I made for finishing this lunar cycle and letting go of old hurts and forgiving myself.
The next part of that ritual is making positive plans and moves towards the life I want to have.
Umm... it's working REALLY well...
Thank you, Rina
