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Pissed The Fuck Off
Get your own ideas
From the trees of inspiration
The poems that are written
Come from the soul they don't need
Your rewrite or revision
No one needs a clone or a copy
A mere shadow
Mocking in tone
Fuck that shit
If you have nothing original to say
Why not quit?
From the trees of inspiration
The poems that are written
Come from the soul they don't need
Your rewrite or revision
No one needs a clone or a copy
A mere shadow
Mocking in tone
Fuck that shit
If you have nothing original to say
Why not quit?
Published 8th Apr 2011
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8th Apr 2011 4:31am
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8th Apr 2011 3:16pm
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8th Apr 2011 4:40am
they say imitation is the sincerest form of flattery
I would take it as a compliment
I would take it as a compliment
8th Apr 2011 4:42am
I guess your right..DY I didn't look it that way..thank you for giving me some insight..peace Crim
8th Apr 2011 4:40am
Awe crim your to sweet to be pissed.. Never sweat the small stuff.. People hate and that's ok kill them with kindness I say.. Nice poem btw raw and real.. Tell them girl
8th Apr 2011 4:45am
I love your work GG..your right kill them with kindness..you go and keep going..you're a sweetie..peace Crim
8th Apr 2011 5:01am
8th Apr 2011 5:04am
No way your a fire of insight..lady you burn with the passion of a beautiful poetess..peace Crim
12th Apr 2011 3:38am
12th Apr 2011 3:47am
1st Jul 2011 7:00pm
I know just where your commin from... only annoying thing is that I've been having a spell of not many original ideas and its been pissin me off haha
