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A poem is a poem, no matter how small
Bigger isn't always better
Verses should cling
Like a web weaved in the mind
Some short ones crash into a person
Hitting harder than the big ones
They could be fierce
Striking quietly
Like opium flowing through the body
Verses should cling
Like a web weaved in the mind
Some short ones crash into a person
Hitting harder than the big ones
They could be fierce
Striking quietly
Like opium flowing through the body
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Re: A poem is a poem, no matter how small
6th Aug 2014 1:33pm
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6th Aug 2014 4:47pm
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6th Aug 2014 5:14pm
Re: A poem is a poem, no matter how small
Anonymous
6th Aug 2014 4:49pm
"Je N'ai fait celle-ci plus longue que parceque je n'ai pas eu le loisir de la faire plus courte."
("I have only made this letter rather long
because I have not had time to make it shorter.")
-Pascal.
("I have only made this letter rather long
because I have not had time to make it shorter.")
-Pascal.
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6th Aug 2014 5:16pm
Re: A poem is a poem, no matter how small
6th Aug 2014 5:58pm
Sometimes less is better as the dogma in architecture...good read Tommie Lynn!
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6th Aug 2014 6:18pm
Re: A poem is a poem, no matter how small
6th Aug 2014 6:45pm
But few words she wrote
each penetrating my soul
keys to locked desire
Brava dear Tommie!
each penetrating my soul
keys to locked desire
Brava dear Tommie!
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6th Aug 2014 7:18pm
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6th Aug 2014 7:07pm
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re: Re: A poem is a poem, no matter how small
6th Aug 2014 7:21pm
I was told long, long ago...
"Never write a check your ass can't cash!"
I live by that!
Tis true! Thank you Jack! ;)
"Never write a check your ass can't cash!"
I live by that!
Tis true! Thank you Jack! ;)
Re: A poem is a poem, no matter how small
6th Aug 2014 7:53pm
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6th Aug 2014 8:08pm
Re: A poem is a poem, no matter how small
7th Aug 2014 3:11am
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7th Aug 2014 1:05pm
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Anonymous
7th Aug 2014 11:23pm
Nice poem Tommie, I am in 100% agreement. I actually find myself enjoying shorter poems more often than long ones, like this one
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re: Re: A poem is a poem, no matter how small
8th Aug 2014 1:19am
The long ones are great! I just feel I lose what I've already read by the time I reach the end...but that just means I need to focus more...lol
Thank you JT, I appreciate your words. :)
Thank you JT, I appreciate your words. :)