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A poem is a poem, no matter how small
Bigger isn't always better
Verses should cling
Like a web weaved in the mind
Some short ones crash into a person
Hitting harder than the big ones
They could be fierce
Striking quietly
Like opium flowing through the body
Verses should cling
Like a web weaved in the mind
Some short ones crash into a person
Hitting harder than the big ones
They could be fierce
Striking quietly
Like opium flowing through the body
Published 6th Aug 2014
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2014 3:49pm
"Je N'ai fait celle-ci plus longue que parceque je n'ai pas eu le loisir de la faire plus courte."
("I have only made this letter rather long
because I have not had time to make it shorter.")
-Pascal.
("I have only made this letter rather long
because I have not had time to make it shorter.")
-Pascal.
6th Aug 2014 4:16pm
6th Aug 2014 4:58pm
Sometimes less is better as the dogma in architecture...good read Tommie Lynn!
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6th Aug 2014 5:18pm
6th Aug 2014 5:45pm
But few words she wrote
each penetrating my soul
keys to locked desire
Brava dear Tommie!
each penetrating my soul
keys to locked desire
Brava dear Tommie!
6th Aug 2014 6:18pm
Anonymous
6th Aug 2014 6:07pm
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6th Aug 2014 6:21pm
I was told long, long ago...
"Never write a check your ass can't cash!"
I live by that!
Tis true! Thank you Jack! ;)
"Never write a check your ass can't cash!"
I live by that!
Tis true! Thank you Jack! ;)
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Anonymous
7th Aug 2014 10:23pm
Nice poem Tommie, I am in 100% agreement. I actually find myself enjoying shorter poems more often than long ones, like this one
8th Aug 2014 00:19am
The long ones are great! I just feel I lose what I've already read by the time I reach the end...but that just means I need to focus more...lol
Thank you JT, I appreciate your words. :)
Thank you JT, I appreciate your words. :)
