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Soul Mate
My mind hears the call
But it delays as though
This will all pass away
My heart hears it as well
It wants to race and
Find it’s other half to
Finally be whole and
Blissfully alive once again
My soul doesn’t wait
It flees its prison
Every chance it gets
To be with its destined mate
Lost all those lifetimes ago
I relish in the happiness
It brings back to me
For it brings me closer to you
But I fear that I won’t be able
To command it to return
If one day
It decides to remain
With you
My soul mate
(C) 2014 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
But it delays as though
This will all pass away
My heart hears it as well
It wants to race and
Find it’s other half to
Finally be whole and
Blissfully alive once again
My soul doesn’t wait
It flees its prison
Every chance it gets
To be with its destined mate
Lost all those lifetimes ago
I relish in the happiness
It brings back to me
For it brings me closer to you
But I fear that I won’t be able
To command it to return
If one day
It decides to remain
With you
My soul mate
(C) 2014 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
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Re: Soul Mate
5th Aug 2014 6:58pm
You just totally amaze me. This has simplistic beauty and such personal depth
Xoxoxo
Belle
Xoxoxo
Belle
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5th Aug 2014 6:59pm
Re: Soul Mate
5th Aug 2014 7:19pm
"It wants to race and
Find it's other half to
Finally be whole and
Blissfully alive once again"
Sweet baby Jesus...that's AHmazing!
Feeling every bit of this outstanding poem!
Thank you for sharing this. :)
Find it's other half to
Finally be whole and
Blissfully alive once again"
Sweet baby Jesus...that's AHmazing!
Feeling every bit of this outstanding poem!
Thank you for sharing this. :)
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5th Aug 2014 7:29pm
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5th Aug 2014 8:49pm
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Re: Soul Mate
5th Aug 2014 8:53pm
It's our own limitations. We set them and subconsciously we abide by them. Fear of it ending and the realization that we knew it wouldn't last.
Re: Soul Mate
5th Aug 2014 11:17pm
connecting with 'the one' that you've known for aeons but not always shared a physical life with is powerful...beyond imagination.....
then to know your path in that physical life is not to be together is heartbreaking....beyond imagination....
thank you xmar for your poem..... :)
then to know your path in that physical life is not to be together is heartbreaking....beyond imagination....
thank you xmar for your poem..... :)
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5th Aug 2014 11:27pm
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2014 1:44am
Stunning!!! Wowzer!! Beautiful, graceful, sensual.......heart melting write. Enjoyed this sacred piece very much. Xo :)
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6th Aug 2014 4:43pm
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2014 11:06am
Soul mates are rare, just like good poems!
Much enjoyed this one, Xmar!
Much enjoyed this one, Xmar!
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6th Aug 2014 4:44pm
Re: Soul Mate
6th Aug 2014 6:07pm
i'm strongly reminded of plato's soul mate theory. tres belle, xmar and much enjoyed
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6th Aug 2014 6:31pm
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Anonymous
19th Aug 2014 4:34am
Such beauty in the soul that writes this. Like it a lot! :)
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