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This Madness
Breathe me into your soul
Let me dwell within your body
To see the reason for my madness
Let me know where it comes from
And what divine entity has blessed it so
A piece of heaven
Given to you
On your day of birth
Familiar and powerfully alluring
A home to me
From ages ago
(C) 2014 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
Let me dwell within your body
To see the reason for my madness
Let me know where it comes from
And what divine entity has blessed it so
A piece of heaven
Given to you
On your day of birth
Familiar and powerfully alluring
A home to me
From ages ago
(C) 2014 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
Published 5th Aug 2014
| Edited 3rd Feb 2017
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5th Aug 2014 6:42pm
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5th Aug 2014 6:52pm
5th Aug 2014 7:14pm
To be the woman that makes a man so crazy that he writes poetry about her! This is the woman I crave to be...Love your words. :)Good or bad, shes a lucky one.
5th Aug 2014 7:17pm
5th Aug 2014 7:20pm
This sentence right here that you have written makes me believe that you BOTH are....lucky in love...:)
5th Aug 2014 8:23pm
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5th Aug 2014 11:19pm
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5th Aug 2014 11:28pm
5th Aug 2014 11:40pm
i always like your ink xmar.....
but these last 2 poems have been exceptional...in my opinion....
thank you...... :) x
but these last 2 poems have been exceptional...in my opinion....
thank you...... :) x
5th Aug 2014 11:42pm
6th Aug 2014 1:45am
You are so good at transforming a strong heart to a melting one. Another jaw dropping write. Enjoyed! Xo :)
6th Aug 2014 6:21pm
6th Aug 2014 6:04pm
well that opening line just caught me hook line and sinker. rather peeved you thought of it before me lol
this is love poetry at its best. enjoyed
this is love poetry at its best. enjoyed
6th Aug 2014 6:23pm
17th Nov 2014 8:19pm
I have read this before ..for some reason I thought I commented before ..good write xmar
18th Nov 2014 10:58pm
Deja vu? Maybe you meant to do it but forgot? Thank you and I am glad you liked it. Stop in any time.
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