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the nife for love
i cut foryou i screme for you i love you but you dont loveme to what i gon though fore you the scares on my arm show you i love you your name on my leg the love that i feel hurts but i feel i love you if you love me to...
Published 7th Apr 2011
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10th Oct 2011 9:28pm
You said honest so this is it.
Grammar, spelling and somthing of actually context would be a good start after that well... sometimes there's nothing eles to be said.
Grammar, spelling and somthing of actually context would be a good start after that well... sometimes there's nothing eles to be said.
