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Blood Lust pt 1
He caught her scent
At first moonlight
A sweet and savory beauty
He will track and taste her tonight
Lurking down street and alleys
His insatiable blood lust grows
Her draw is all too consuming
He will own her this night
The closer his search takes him
His senses begin to peak
Feeling her sweet red juices flowing
With her every heartbeat
She felt his presence too
Through her dreams she offered
Invitation to enter her realm
Come and join her in her bed
With one firm commanding touch
He is now the Master of her existence
Mind, body and soul
Her thoughts and dreams are now his
Outlining her every curve
From forehead to toe
Deciding where he must deliver
That satisfying first bite
This beauty's neck will not do
Another scent draws him in
Downward to her sweetest spot
He delivers a hungered liiiiccckkk
Arches his back!!!!
Eyes roll back!!!!!
Fangs exposed!!!!
BITE!!!!!!!!
At first moonlight
A sweet and savory beauty
He will track and taste her tonight
Lurking down street and alleys
His insatiable blood lust grows
Her draw is all too consuming
He will own her this night
The closer his search takes him
His senses begin to peak
Feeling her sweet red juices flowing
With her every heartbeat
She felt his presence too
Through her dreams she offered
Invitation to enter her realm
Come and join her in her bed
With one firm commanding touch
He is now the Master of her existence
Mind, body and soul
Her thoughts and dreams are now his
Outlining her every curve
From forehead to toe
Deciding where he must deliver
That satisfying first bite
This beauty's neck will not do
Another scent draws him in
Downward to her sweetest spot
He delivers a hungered liiiiccckkk
Arches his back!!!!
Eyes roll back!!!!!
Fangs exposed!!!!
BITE!!!!!!!!
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2nd Aug 2014 3:51pm
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Anonymous
2nd Aug 2014 7:22pm
oh my oh my....epic ink
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2nd Aug 2014 9:30pm
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2nd Aug 2014 7:58pm
Women have a commanding hold over men. Their beauty both inside and out demand our attentions. Great write Belle. It's sensual and romantic. Great write. Can't wait for the other parts.
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2nd Aug 2014 9:49pm
X hun the right man can have an amszing hold on a woman too. The perfect kiss or nibble can get her total devotion
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle
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2nd Aug 2014 8:14pm
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2nd Aug 2014 9:53pm
John im so honored by your comment. So my hunger was shouting off your screen? Hmmmm...then i did something right.
Hugs
Belle
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Belle
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2nd Aug 2014 9:26pm
Lilsouthernbelle, luv :-* ~
This poem is utterly delicious! Vampires can be such a wicked delight - I haven't thought of them much since Anne Rice's The Vampire Lestat and all that followed in her series. Good. Lord. That is a sensual book and what you have written here could very well fit right in it.
Sensuality incarnate, luv, that's what you have here. I had that same feeling I had reading passages in Lestat.
Excruciatingly exquisite, luv. Truly. :-*
This poem is utterly delicious! Vampires can be such a wicked delight - I haven't thought of them much since Anne Rice's The Vampire Lestat and all that followed in her series. Good. Lord. That is a sensual book and what you have written here could very well fit right in it.
Sensuality incarnate, luv, that's what you have here. I had that same feeling I had reading passages in Lestat.
Excruciatingly exquisite, luv. Truly. :-*
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2nd Aug 2014 9:57pm
Vampires to me are pure sexuality. Mmmmmm....yes Lestat was quite yummy. Thank you giving me that flahback. Your wonderful comment so humble me
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Beile
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Beile
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Anonymous
3rd Aug 2014 4:41am
Um......speechless on this sexy write. Mmmmmmm! This is HOT!! Wow....fan time. LOL!! Xo :)
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3rd Aug 2014 5:05am
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3rd Aug 2014 11:45pm
Dark full of desire...enjiyed every word...yoir very diverse in the erotic category...well done
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4th Aug 2014 5:50am