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The Sun At Dawn is Like the Crowning of A Baby's Head
The sun at dawn is a crescent.
The solar sphere only half-way above the horizon
Is all but unnoticed.
For most of mankind is still asleep..
How sad that people are unaware that birth is taking place!
Yes, the sun emerging past the horizon line
Is like the "crowning" of a baby's head at birth.
(For the horizon line is like the slit
at the entrance to the birth canal.
Mother Earth gives birth daily.
Each new sun is a shining newborn,
A gloriously shining newborn baby,
- how Glorious is that!
If the morning sun ascending the sky
Is like a princess in line for the throne,
Wanting it, preparing for it,
Then the sun at noon is that same princess
But now she's on the throne as the New Queen!
Noon becomes a time for Earthlings to celebrate -
For a glorious coronation
is taking place in the heavens!
PS:The following lines were at the finish of the poem.
But now I'm putting them as just a footnote.
Because they are unnecessary.
What do you think?
"Oh let each ray of light from the sun
represent the burning desire of new queens
(the heads of governments everywhere)
to serve and to guide the people of the nation.
"Oh let the heat reflected from Earth to sky
stand for the feeling of solidarity
of citizens for their government.
The solar sphere only half-way above the horizon
Is all but unnoticed.
For most of mankind is still asleep..
How sad that people are unaware that birth is taking place!
Yes, the sun emerging past the horizon line
Is like the "crowning" of a baby's head at birth.
(For the horizon line is like the slit
at the entrance to the birth canal.
Mother Earth gives birth daily.
Each new sun is a shining newborn,
A gloriously shining newborn baby,
- how Glorious is that!
If the morning sun ascending the sky
Is like a princess in line for the throne,
Wanting it, preparing for it,
Then the sun at noon is that same princess
But now she's on the throne as the New Queen!
Noon becomes a time for Earthlings to celebrate -
For a glorious coronation
is taking place in the heavens!
PS:The following lines were at the finish of the poem.
But now I'm putting them as just a footnote.
Because they are unnecessary.
What do you think?
"Oh let each ray of light from the sun
represent the burning desire of new queens
(the heads of governments everywhere)
to serve and to guide the people of the nation.
"Oh let the heat reflected from Earth to sky
stand for the feeling of solidarity
of citizens for their government.
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