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On the ceiling
Beneath him they are on the ceiling
his naked body covering hers
her long legs cross him like a ribbon
He makes love to her
and she watches every
bend and thrust he makes
The room spins, his view from the ceiling
he now beneath her
watching her backwards and down
She makes love to him
and he feels it
her warmth tightening around him
Leaning back her fair hair
dangles on his chest
his hands glide from her rib cage
Cupping her soft breasts
her nipples slip through,
finger to finger
They are on the ceiling
making love
surrounded in a red hot glow
He slithered his way down
to her throbbing bud,
rubbing gently with hard hands
Finding her release
all over him and his inside her,
from the ceiling
his naked body covering hers
her long legs cross him like a ribbon
He makes love to her
and she watches every
bend and thrust he makes
The room spins, his view from the ceiling
he now beneath her
watching her backwards and down
She makes love to him
and he feels it
her warmth tightening around him
Leaning back her fair hair
dangles on his chest
his hands glide from her rib cage
Cupping her soft breasts
her nipples slip through,
finger to finger
They are on the ceiling
making love
surrounded in a red hot glow
He slithered his way down
to her throbbing bud,
rubbing gently with hard hands
Finding her release
all over him and his inside her,
from the ceiling
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re: Re: On the ceiling
28th Jul 2014 5:09pm
Re: On the ceiling
28th Jul 2014 5:21pm
Exactly Tommie, Mirrors are wonderful! They add a new perspective, to things. A voyeurs delight. Excellent!
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re: Re: On the ceiling
28th Jul 2014 5:32pm
Re: On the ceiling
28th Jul 2014 5:41pm
re: Re: On the ceiling
28th Jul 2014 5:46pm
Re: On the ceiling
28th Jul 2014 5:47pm
Nothing like ceiling & wall mirrors ... a reflective orgy and mi brujita loves watching us ...
Cool sexy ink
Cool sexy ink
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re: Re: On the ceiling
28th Jul 2014 8:27pm
Re: On the ceiling
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28th Jul 2014 6:18pm
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re: Re: On the ceiling
28th Jul 2014 8:29pm
No Oscar needed Jack...
I wasn't sure if I should post this
one or not, now I'm glad I did!
Thank you :)
I wasn't sure if I should post this
one or not, now I'm glad I did!
Thank you :)
re: Re: On the ceiling
28th Jul 2014 8:29pm
Re: On the ceiling
28th Jul 2014 8:40pm
Echo Jack Tex. Another excellent 'mirror on the ceiling' piece.
Favourite verses, for the lively descriptions of the lovemaking:
Beneath him they are on the ceiling
his naked body covering hers
her long legs cross him like a ribbon
He makes love to her
and she watches every
bend and thrust he makes
She makes love to him
and he feels it
her warmth tightening around him
Cupping her soft breasts
her nipples slip through,
finger to finger
They are on the ceiling
making love
surrounded in a red hot glow
He slithered his way down
to her throbbing bud,
rubbing gently with hard hands
Finding her release
all over him and his inside her,
from the ceiling
Favourite verses, for the lively descriptions of the lovemaking:
Beneath him they are on the ceiling
his naked body covering hers
her long legs cross him like a ribbon
He makes love to her
and she watches every
bend and thrust he makes
She makes love to him
and he feels it
her warmth tightening around him
Cupping her soft breasts
her nipples slip through,
finger to finger
They are on the ceiling
making love
surrounded in a red hot glow
He slithered his way down
to her throbbing bud,
rubbing gently with hard hands
Finding her release
all over him and his inside her,
from the ceiling
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re: Re: On the ceiling
28th Jul 2014 10:44pm
Re: On the ceiling
28th Jul 2014 9:12pm
Beautifully written, Tommie. I love the sensual gesture represented in "her warmth tightening around him "
Well done my friend!
Well done my friend!
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re: Re: On the ceiling
28th Jul 2014 10:44pm
Re: On the ceiling
28th Jul 2014 10:43pm
re: Re: On the ceiling
28th Jul 2014 10:45pm