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Your turn
Cant you see what you're doing to me?
You led me on far too long you see?
I crave to make you burn
I crave to make you bleed
Im not the one to scorn
Your turn for the hurt
Your turn for the pain
Your turn for the heartbreak
Your turn to be insane
You'll never hurt me again
I'll beat you to the punch my friend
I'll literally knock you down to the floor
You have no idea what I have in store
I wanted to believe in you
But suddenly you were through
Ill make u pay
For all you've done
What more can I say?
Revenge is so much fun
You led me on far too long you see?
I crave to make you burn
I crave to make you bleed
Im not the one to scorn
Your turn for the hurt
Your turn for the pain
Your turn for the heartbreak
Your turn to be insane
You'll never hurt me again
I'll beat you to the punch my friend
I'll literally knock you down to the floor
You have no idea what I have in store
I wanted to believe in you
But suddenly you were through
Ill make u pay
For all you've done
What more can I say?
Revenge is so much fun
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Re: Your turn
28th Jul 2014 7:03am
Vengeance never does solve anything, but it sure does taste delicious... And I definitely know what it's like to be captivated by the sweetness.
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28th Jul 2014 7:22am
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28th Jul 2014 7:25am
I agree, it so is. I think it's helpful too with releasing emotion and such. As long as you know you won't do anything crazy, let the crazy thoughts flow, I say. :P
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28th Jul 2014 7:27am
It is a good emotional release. Its like therapy lol :) na. just my thoughts are crazy lol :P
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28th Jul 2014 7:54am
Don't worry I've got some crazy thoughts too! So I feel ya. And I wouldn't have it any other way. :P And hey it is kinda like therapy in a way haha helps get it out of your system.
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Re: Your turn
28th Jul 2014 8:56am
Love this poem...though I would put it under anger or dark category....either way I felt it .... and yes its fun lol
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Re: Your turn
Anonymous
28th Jul 2014 10:38pm
there's nothing quite like a woman scorned, intense.
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Re: Your turn
28th Jul 2014 10:53pm
Awesome write Ms. Carol!!
Love the read sweets!!
You ink well, never stop!!
Sir Lancelott
check me out sometime
Love the read sweets!!
You ink well, never stop!!
Sir Lancelott
check me out sometime
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