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Feel...
what if i came into your world
and made you feel the things i do…?
told you i would love you..
enough to rip your world in two…
would you have me if i told you
everything was true…?
that you were what i wanted
what i was dreaming for…
would you let me enter
if i came banging on your door?
and made you feel the things i do…?
told you i would love you..
enough to rip your world in two…
would you have me if i told you
everything was true…?
that you were what i wanted
what i was dreaming for…
would you let me enter
if i came banging on your door?
Published 28th Jul 2014
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Anonymous
28th Jul 2014 2:59am
I like this JeJe, would people actually own up their feelings when it comes down to it? Sometimes love stares them in the face but they're too blind to see it.
Well penned !!
Well penned !!
28th Jul 2014 1:29pm
Thank You Rina!! So true…it really makes one wonder how many times the real thing was standing right in front of you..and you let it go.
28th Jul 2014 2:26pm
How many times? Once. And every day for the rest of my life. You have put it wonderfully here, miss.
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Anonymous
1st Aug 2014 5:05pm
anyone who is open to express all their thoughts without fear, are truly unique individuals.... but for the souls who except us and not runaway are truly blessed. lol.... it's not an easy ride.... but worth the journey.
1st Aug 2014 7:00pm
Thank You dkruie…I am very fortunate that I have a few that hang in for the ride as complicated as it is, lol, life is a worthy journey.
