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In a few minutes

In a few minutes, I'll hug my love in my arms
Enjoyed by the idea to smell her sweet perfume
To feel her silky skin under my eager lips
To caress her hair with my affectionate fingers

Her soft voice will tell me as a jingling bell
"I missed you so much, my love" and I'll hug
Her stronger, feeling her frail sweet body
In my arms, we will be unable to stop to talk

At the Airport, all the people will watch us
Smiling for our infinite thirst of the other
And we'll stay a long time, hugging together
We'll force everybody to get around us

And suddenly, we'll run quickly to the car
Leaving this place of laughs and sad tears
We'll fast drive up to the hotel, our hands
Unable to be free, linked one to the other

Our senses will be concentrated to the other
I'll smell only the sweet perfume of my love
My hands will need to caress her skin, her hair
And my heart will beat very stronger, faster

In a few minutes, hey, guy, you are dreaming
It should be in a month and you should plan
This while with all your knowledge, your heart
To have the hugest event in your life. Be sure!

Written by malin69

(malin)

Published 22nd Jul 2014

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Re: In a few minutes

scarletvelvet

22nd Jul 2014 11:21pm

You manage to capture well the feeling of two people who are madly in love and are desperately yearning to see each other told from the perspective of the guy -- I enjoy the little twist at the end -- him dreaming and the event of
the meeting still a month away -- your poem feels real -- much enjoyed!!!