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Lol haha lmao I'll be me you be you thank you
Fakes and phony people everywhere I turn
People who think they are so smart
Talking like they stepped out of a book
We know that's no art
Being smart is good you see
Judging someone because they don't talk like you is
so sad
so vain
so very sorry for you
You just missed out on knowing someone that is smart indeed
She just doesn't rub it in anyones face
She knows her place
She has nothing to prove
She doesn't act superior Like most do
She's just an average girl
And so are you unless your god, Jesus,
Ben Franklin, the pope, Bono,
No your "no one" sorry to say
so know your place
Stop talking to me as if I was child just because I don't give two fucks how smart you are or what the fuck you have to say..
Your poems don't mean a thing to me just means you talk a good talk
Show me proof that your poem is published
It made it into the hall of fame
When Everyone knows your name
then maybe I'll give you another thought. Naw not even then
You mean nothing to me your probably just a poor lonely old man or women..
With no one there just a computer and you.
So sad
Don't be mad
Embrace yourself
if you can't stand yourself
I really don't think anyone can
Oops lol my bad hahahaha
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Ah yes...
...poetry written on the end of forum fights...well expressed, and obviously fresh...
Can you just check the last 3 lines, as I think maybe it should read "if you can't stand yourself...."
Anyway, a good honest fuck-you-and-the-horse-you-rode-in-on poem.
Can you just check the last 3 lines, as I think maybe it should read "if you can't stand yourself...."
Anyway, a good honest fuck-you-and-the-horse-you-rode-in-on poem.
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re: Ah yes...
5th Apr 2011 1:17am
haha thankyou and i will correct that error
and thats exactly what it is a big old fuck you
thank you again
and thats exactly what it is a big old fuck you
thank you again
lol
5th Apr 2011 1:19am
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5th Apr 2011 8:54am
Just wanted to say again how much I enjoyed this poem..it inspired fire in me..peace Crim :)
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5th Apr 2011 11:53am
review
5th Apr 2011 1:35am
I am a bigger fan of you Gg then I am of Bono, his voice never agreed with my ears :O
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5th Apr 2011 1:45am
really that's an honor dragon personally i think his voice is dubbed but who am i :) thank you again sweetie
i was so scared
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5th Apr 2011 2:06am
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Forum fight steam, lol
5th Apr 2011 2:45am
Haha, I agree with hemihead. In hip hop this would have been a 'diss track'.
You dont want a reply, do you?
Maybe you should get the other two girls together to form a crew, lol. Any name in mind? Haha.
An honest piece of writing you have there... still 'following' you.
You dont want a reply, do you?
Maybe you should get the other two girls together to form a crew, lol. Any name in mind? Haha.
An honest piece of writing you have there... still 'following' you.
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re: Forum fight steam, lol
5th Apr 2011 2:47am
ok
5th Apr 2011 2:59am
Here's ur comment I liked it even though ur in the next room and all u wanted was a comment
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re: ok
5th Apr 2011 3:01am
Awe your so mean no I wanted your input jerk whatever save your comment see if I put any on yours
re: re: ok
5th Apr 2011 3:03am
Haha
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5th Apr 2011 5:00am
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Re: :o)
5th Apr 2011 8:20am
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5th Apr 2011 11:52am