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Angels to Ashes
You're an angel,
I'm a monster,
But I love you anyway.
So come down from heaven,
I'll come out of Hell,
And we'll meet halfway.
You supply angelic intimacy,
I'll bring the sinful passion,
And our two halves can make a whole.
We may burn for eternity,
But at least we'll burn together,
So let love take its toll.
We're playing with love,
Playing with matches,
We're from dust to dust,
From angels to ashes.
I'm a monster,
But I love you anyway.
So come down from heaven,
I'll come out of Hell,
And we'll meet halfway.
You supply angelic intimacy,
I'll bring the sinful passion,
And our two halves can make a whole.
We may burn for eternity,
But at least we'll burn together,
So let love take its toll.
We're playing with love,
Playing with matches,
We're from dust to dust,
From angels to ashes.
Published 21st Jul 2014
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22nd Jul 2014 3:26am
22nd Jul 2014 4:39am
Thank you, and I also like the way the last couple lines sound, as well. I think it was one of my better rhymes.
22nd Jul 2014 3:43am
I totally pictured this in my mind as I read it. A beautiful angel and a hideous demon entwined by love...great poem my friend! :)
22nd Jul 2014 4:43am
Thank you very much for the read and the comment. I find it reassuring that you visualized it, it makes me feel it got poetry across, not just a message.
23rd Jul 2014 2:30am
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25th Jul 2014 2:10pm
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26th Jul 2014 3:47pm
'You're an angel,
I'm a monster,
But I love you anyway.
So come down from heaven,
I'll come out of Hell,
And we'll meet halfway.'
That is my favorite part and I enjoyed this beautiful poem
I'm a monster,
But I love you anyway.
So come down from heaven,
I'll come out of Hell,
And we'll meet halfway.'
That is my favorite part and I enjoyed this beautiful poem
26th Jul 2014 3:53pm
