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Cold
Silence fills the chilly midnight air
I breath in and out looking around...
I see nothing..but complete darkness..
I freeze...
I'm surrounded by nothing but loneliness.
Inches away from the frozen ice,
There's more then what meets the eye...
I begin to walk towards the chilly waters,
Then I turn,
Looking down at what I've become..
I breath in and out looking around...
I see nothing..but complete darkness..
I freeze...
I'm surrounded by nothing but loneliness.
Inches away from the frozen ice,
There's more then what meets the eye...
I begin to walk towards the chilly waters,
Then I turn,
Looking down at what I've become..
Published 4th Apr 2011
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4th Apr 2011 9:46pm
5th Apr 2011 00:23am
Thank you.. I am a weird person I suppose, its something I wrote back in October of 2010.
5th Apr 2011 3:01am
5th Apr 2011 12:59pm
5th Apr 2011 00:46am
5th Apr 2011 1:28am
5th Apr 2011 4:25pm
poems dope...your not weird yo...poetry here to express yourself..if your weird then everybody is weird
6th Apr 2011 1:54am
Thanks.. Sometimes I wish I was better at writing.. Im more so into horror and torcher.. Its like my way of dealing with life itself.
