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Drift to me
Close your eyes, drift to me, in dreams provoked
Open the dusty case to my fragile heart
Strum the strings with tender strokes
Feel the flowing rhythm, rise of emotions strong
Revive with a kiss, the sweet melody to start
Cradle in your embrace the birth of a new song
Deftly scaling the defenses to the castles within
Pain, sorrow and fear, having coldly stood guard
Your care and caress, breathing light unto me
Cherishing my percussion, like it’s never been
Softly whispering away all that was charred
From the halo of dreams your touch sets me free
Wishing and yearning your arms could reach this far
To give warmth, dispel the past, and cause my body to sing
Open the dusty case to my fragile heart
Strum the strings with tender strokes
Feel the flowing rhythm, rise of emotions strong
Revive with a kiss, the sweet melody to start
Cradle in your embrace the birth of a new song
Deftly scaling the defenses to the castles within
Pain, sorrow and fear, having coldly stood guard
Your care and caress, breathing light unto me
Cherishing my percussion, like it’s never been
Softly whispering away all that was charred
From the halo of dreams your touch sets me free
Wishing and yearning your arms could reach this far
To give warmth, dispel the past, and cause my body to sing
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Re: Drift to me
19th Jul 2014 12:22pm
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19th Jul 2014 9:06pm
Thank you Sir.. you humble me with your words.. always supportive.. i am indeed fortunate.. with love and respect..xoxo domore
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19th Jul 2014 12:37pm
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19th Jul 2014 9:11pm
Thank you Jack :) Always pleased to see you stop by for a read.. :)your comments most kind. with much respect to you..xoxo domore
ps...as for the question.. do I ever hate.. no..I dislike...I get disappointed..I distance myself.. but to hate would be like adding another seed of nastiness to an already effd up world..I endeavor to only plant that which is good..
ps...as for the question.. do I ever hate.. no..I dislike...I get disappointed..I distance myself.. but to hate would be like adding another seed of nastiness to an already effd up world..I endeavor to only plant that which is good..
Re: Drift to me
19th Jul 2014 5:30pm
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19th Jul 2014 9:13pm
:) thank you Sir Hash.. love your comment :) 1)excellent line..2)my friends occasionally call me Sam.. sooo your comment fits wonderfully :) with much respect..xoxo domore
Re: Drift to me
19th Jul 2014 6:03pm
transcendental, symphonic, romantic....
this is one hell of a love poem, beautiful domore xoxo
~transatlantichugs
this is one hell of a love poem, beautiful domore xoxo
~transatlantichugs
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re: Re: Drift to me
19th Jul 2014 9:16pm
awwwww feeling the transatlantichugs Beautiful kat.. dear friend you honor me greatly by your comment and add to your RL list.. I am sitting here with huge smile upon my face..sending some transatlantic hugs your way with love and respect..xoxo domore
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Anonymous
19th Jul 2014 8:25pm
Oooooo La La......will be his first chorus. Just when I thought the hot flash needed......I had to read this. LOL!!! Mercy Sweet One this is HOT!!! Very sensual and sexy. Luv inks you well. Enjoyed! Xo :)
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19th Jul 2014 9:18pm
Lovely flower... adore your comment!! "Luv inks you well".. perfection!! seriously may hafta use that line sometime.. Sooo glad you enjoyed the read my dear friend.. your comment priceless.. with love and respect..sending hugs..xoxo domore
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19th Jul 2014 9:25pm
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19th Jul 2014 9:31pm
LOL thank you miss mysterious, for the read and kind comment... welcome to my lil part of DU.. from your comment..you've peeked my interest.. I shall endeavor to visit you soon. would love to read your work :) with much respect..domore
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19th Jul 2014 9:34pm
Re: Drift to me
21st Jul 2014 2:12pm
Like a stunning piece of art this evokes feelings that shutter the soul, stopping reality as we sit and ponder such wondrous words that flow freely down our cheeks in a pool of envy yet also inspired to such connection we smile to the love that stuns us, that hold us to this moment, not wanting to leave.
Masterpiece
Masterpiece
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re: Re: Drift to me
21st Jul 2014 5:17pm
Awakened... thank you most graciously for your reading.. your comment is poetry in itself.. moving and evoking deep feelings within... I am most honored that this has found a home within your RL. with deepest respect and eyes downcast..domore
Re: Drift to me
22nd Jul 2014 8:37pm
Ahh, tender Lass.
Wistful dreams, thoughts perfectly refined and shared in dramatic fashion.
A pleasure to behold, read and feel the true sense of
emotions transcribed herein.
Casting treasures at you, dear Lady.
Treasure befitting this treasured work.
xoxo ...
Wistful dreams, thoughts perfectly refined and shared in dramatic fashion.
A pleasure to behold, read and feel the true sense of
emotions transcribed herein.
Casting treasures at you, dear Lady.
Treasure befitting this treasured work.
xoxo ...
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re: Re: Drift to me
22nd Jul 2014 9:37pm
Mr. VP ... MLH...tis my joy that you read and comment so graciously.. treasures aplenty received from you..I am humbled and honored by your kindness.. Amaaaazingly big smiles upon my face that this has found a home with you....with love and respect..xoxo domore
Re: Drift to me
22nd Jul 2014 10:08pm
It's soft and romantic. A seductive voice seducing the reader and a lover alike. Enjoyed it very much domore.
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22nd Jul 2014 11:54pm
thank you xmar82.. again you honor me with kind words within your comment. so glad you enjoyed...with much respect..domore
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1st Aug 2014 8:11pm
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1st Aug 2014 9:27pm
Thank you miss Sara B... I am sooo pleased that you feel this.. I am humbled by your kind sentiments... with much respect..xoxo domore
Re: Drift to me
9th Aug 2014 3:56am
Domore2014 I must say that your writing technique's inspire and intrigue.I love the way you write.A definte masterpiece!!!Thank you!
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10th Aug 2014 6:46pm
A heartfelt sincere thank you Pleasuresofpain.. :) You are most kind.. and I am honored by your comment.. very pleased that you have stopped my way.. with much respect to you.. domore