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Modesty
Everything in front of me is still.
The foreground is:
warm, loud and you.
You show me the pleasure
of all that is homeostatic.
I am nestled in your being/
a bio-dome of lovely creation.
In this, only we, exist,
only you exist.
From a modest place I say,
"This is what love looks like"
The foreground is:
warm, loud and you.
You show me the pleasure
of all that is homeostatic.
I am nestled in your being/
a bio-dome of lovely creation.
In this, only we, exist,
only you exist.
From a modest place I say,
"This is what love looks like"
Published 19th Jul 2014
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19th Jul 2014 3:49am
19th Jul 2014 4:59am
Calm serene peaceful words.
Great write.
Your words mirror your current situation perfrctly.
Keep it up!
Great write.
Your words mirror your current situation perfrctly.
Keep it up!
19th Jul 2014 5:00am
19th Jul 2014 6:39am
20th Jul 2014 6:20pm
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19th Jul 2014 8:52pm
Thanks Jack. You interprets my writing so well. You seem connected to it. I love the support.
Anonymous
19th Jul 2014 6:42pm
A brilliant piece. . .nothing compares to:
"This is what love looks like"
a well thought out verse, I must say. xo, Devlin.
"This is what love looks like"
a well thought out verse, I must say. xo, Devlin.
19th Jul 2014 8:51pm
20th Jul 2014 1:16pm
If that's what love looks like then I'm sure
I have yet to see it but I thank you for
defining it so beautifully my dear lady :)
Brava!
I have yet to see it but I thank you for
defining it so beautifully my dear lady :)
Brava!
20th Jul 2014 4:03pm
7th Aug 2014 7:06pm
The bubble of love. A beautiful place created by the love between two. Good write Scarlett.
8th Aug 2014 6:16am
