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This Insanity
The insanity that leads one to use profanity
And ultimately gets you caught in a web of vanity
Questioning your very unstable sense of sanity
Encourages and invites a motion that ends in a calamity
It’s the acknowledgement of the notion
That allows this course to take promotion
Signed and sealed with a lubricated lotion
That ensures a this very unstable commotion
All at once it grants all actions permission
Even though the event should stay in remission
However forcing us to make a direct decision
Ending it all at once in some sort of completion
This insanity states the head of the table it’s place
Still encouraging any emotion to take part in the race
Participating and providing a worthy opponent to chase
Ensuring that all present not be the one to lose face……
And ultimately gets you caught in a web of vanity
Questioning your very unstable sense of sanity
Encourages and invites a motion that ends in a calamity
It’s the acknowledgement of the notion
That allows this course to take promotion
Signed and sealed with a lubricated lotion
That ensures a this very unstable commotion
All at once it grants all actions permission
Even though the event should stay in remission
However forcing us to make a direct decision
Ending it all at once in some sort of completion
This insanity states the head of the table it’s place
Still encouraging any emotion to take part in the race
Participating and providing a worthy opponent to chase
Ensuring that all present not be the one to lose face……
Published 11th Jul 2014
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12th Jul 2014 7:22am
...such astuteness, this ink! Marvelous and creative observation, Fee! Opening stanza was my fav. :)
Awesome Write! Pen love~
Awesome Write! Pen love~
12th Jul 2014 8:18am
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14th Jul 2014 4:57am
Interesting message here, and AAAA BBBB CCCC DDDD--new rhyme scheme unlike AABB...like it! Unlike RainC, the third stanza was my favorite...
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