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NOTE
Most people would tell you that its do or die
But have you ever felt pressure to the point of committing suicide?
And yes this is a "suicide note"
If you don't believe me reffer to the above quote
The devil jumps out of my closet everytime
He tells me I'm no good and says my poems don't even rhyme
Everyday I feel like a dump site for criticism and because I'm different people call me wierd, horific, crazy and Gothic
Just because I love the site of seeing a female going erotic
Rope, tree, I got it all besides me
And no I'm not killing myself I'm murdering my feelings
Cause they are the only thing that keep me from heeling.
But have you ever felt pressure to the point of committing suicide?
And yes this is a "suicide note"
If you don't believe me reffer to the above quote
The devil jumps out of my closet everytime
He tells me I'm no good and says my poems don't even rhyme
Everyday I feel like a dump site for criticism and because I'm different people call me wierd, horific, crazy and Gothic
Just because I love the site of seeing a female going erotic
Rope, tree, I got it all besides me
And no I'm not killing myself I'm murdering my feelings
Cause they are the only thing that keep me from heeling.
Published 11th Jul 2014
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11th Jul 2014 7:47pm
A lot of people I imagine could relate to this,
murdering my feelings is very strong, filled with hate or desperation, I get both from it.
I like the no rhyme, rhyme as well.
Also the suicide note, quote section.. very committed and well placed.
Have a pretty good idea that heeling should be healing? but maybe I've missed something.
Be Happy
murdering my feelings is very strong, filled with hate or desperation, I get both from it.
I like the no rhyme, rhyme as well.
Also the suicide note, quote section.. very committed and well placed.
Have a pretty good idea that heeling should be healing? but maybe I've missed something.
Be Happy
11th Jul 2014 9:46pm
12th Jul 2014 11:09pm
