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Tease
You got to me
Surprised me
Threw me a curve ball
Caught me completely off-guard
Then struck a match
Lit a fuse, detonated, set the charges
Blew!
You knew what you were doing
Calculated strategist
Set out to conquer
Well
My pussy's all wet
Sopping juices
Flooding honey
I'm making a mess
All your fault
And you're smug with it
Strong and granite
That's all right
Bring that rock
Come on in
Slide into the dampness you've created
Please make good on that tease you penned
Surprised me
Threw me a curve ball
Caught me completely off-guard
Then struck a match
Lit a fuse, detonated, set the charges
Blew!
You knew what you were doing
Calculated strategist
Set out to conquer
Well
My pussy's all wet
Sopping juices
Flooding honey
I'm making a mess
All your fault
And you're smug with it
Strong and granite
That's all right
Bring that rock
Come on in
Slide into the dampness you've created
Please make good on that tease you penned
Published 11th Jul 2014
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The "I'm making a mess" line made me laugh. I'm not sure the levity I got from it was intended, but that doesn't matter...
Enjoyed...
Enjoyed...
11th Jul 2014 6:18am
Thank you Fenom(DiscipleofLife) ~
I am glad you found the hilarity in that line. :-* Life is funny and messy and sexy and lovely. That's half of the bliss of it as far as I'm concerned... :-D
I am glad you found the hilarity in that line. :-* Life is funny and messy and sexy and lovely. That's half of the bliss of it as far as I'm concerned... :-D
11th Jul 2014 7:15am
12th Jul 2014 2:01am
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21st Jul 2014 2:17am
Thank you, xmar82, luv :-*.
I am glad you enjoyed the tease. At the time, I was rather impatient. ;-)
I am glad you enjoyed the tease. At the time, I was rather impatient. ;-)
21st Jan 2016 8:27pm
22nd Jan 2016 5:25pm
Ahhh, JAZZMANOR, luv ~ :-*
I'm not quite certain there was too far to read in that case since that baseball metaphor ended rather quickly, I fear. ;-p
I am glad, however, that I was able to keep you reading for a bit. Hmmm...I had sooo hoped that there might be aught else enticing about this poem... ;-D
I'm not quite certain there was too far to read in that case since that baseball metaphor ended rather quickly, I fear. ;-p
I am glad, however, that I was able to keep you reading for a bit. Hmmm...I had sooo hoped that there might be aught else enticing about this poem... ;-D
22nd Jan 2016 8:39pm
There was but I don't consider my pen as skilled as the person you mention...
22nd Jan 2016 9:03pm
Ahhh, luv, we each bring different gifts, skills, and talents to the table, ne c'est pas? Even within our writing, each of us has somewhat of value, meaning, and great worth, luv. :-*
This is why there is no comparison, truly, between writers. No two are precisely alike, rather like snowflakes: each unique, individual, splendid... :-*
This is why there is no comparison, truly, between writers. No two are precisely alike, rather like snowflakes: each unique, individual, splendid... :-*
22nd Jan 2016 9:14pm
22nd Jan 2016 10:21pm
Okay, well that I relate to absolutely. I think that may be the way for all of us, eh? ;-p That self-critique may be what keeps us constantly striving and fresh. ;-D
