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"Foreskin"
This man was born with no eye lids supplied
He endured surgeries, new skin was applied
Many grafts they did make
From his foreskin did take
Then into the mirror, 'Success,' he cried, but his brother said, "You're a bit cock-eyed"
*September 27, 1993*
Published 10th Jul 2014
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Anonymous
10th Jul 2014 2:44am
Sweet EV......the title alone told me this was going to rock. I was right. LMAO!!!! This is hilarious! Xo :)
10th Jul 2014 3:34am
10th Jul 2014 7:38am
i'm soooo with flowergirl... title in my updates was priceless! the piece certainly didn't disappoint either.
your wit has no bounds, Sir.
your wit has no bounds, Sir.
11th Jul 2014 1:25am
10th Jul 2014 2:57pm
Oh this is just too too funny hun. Nothing like a good chuckle when u first wake. Now ill b stuck for the rest of the day with thoughts of foreskin n my head....lol
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle
11th Jul 2014 1:40am
Pleased to know some laughter ensued, Ms Belle.
Always appreciate your comments. :)
Always appreciate your comments. :)
10th Jul 2014 3:55pm
MR VP...Loud Gufhahahaha's are hard to explain to coworkers... cause lordy knows I aint sayn the real reason I am filled with mirth. Laughter the best of medicines indeed. :) soo enjoy your humor!! with love and respect..xoxo domore
11th Jul 2014 2:11am
Dear Lady, your reaction is a tremendous compliment. Thank you for sharing such good medicine. :)
xo
xo
10th Jul 2014 8:45pm
11th Jul 2014 2:13am
Come on now, Ms Rain. You don't really wish me to stop. I just know you don't. :D
Many thanks.
xo
Many thanks.
xo
Anonymous
11th Jul 2014 8:26am
Oh, God, you got to be kiddin' me?? Damn that mind of yours, VegasPoet! Would you care to trade?. . .xo, Devlin.
11th Jul 2014 3:39pm
Thank you, Ms Devlin, for sharing such great comments. :)
Trade minds? Sure, but you'll be getting a lesser model.
xo
Trade minds? Sure, but you'll be getting a lesser model.
xo
