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that bloke in the corner...
I shan't forget the night he came in,
only to find that his usual seat was
already occupied, he'd never known
it so busy...
only to find that his usual seat was
already occupied, he'd never known
it so busy...
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Re: that bloke in the corner...
8th Jul 2014 1:10am
OK, I'm stumped! :o
I tried writing in these 'garden path poems'
but it's not easy!
Takes years of practise!
I tried writing in these 'garden path poems'
but it's not easy!
Takes years of practise!
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