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Deception
Words speak
tongues twist
eyes shout
let me out.
Skin crawls
hair rises
hearts pound
there's that sound.
Passion bleeds
desires flood
lust burns
the water churns.
Walls collapse
trust crumbles
Cupid falls
and the wolf calls.
tongues twist
eyes shout
let me out.
Skin crawls
hair rises
hearts pound
there's that sound.
Passion bleeds
desires flood
lust burns
the water churns.
Walls collapse
trust crumbles
Cupid falls
and the wolf calls.
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Re: Deception
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Jul 2014 1:41am
7th Jul 2014 1:01am
Oh Hash......my heart is stunned for words. Feel this more than i can express in words. This inspires me! Xo :)
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7th Jul 2014 1:20am
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7th Jul 2014 1:24am
Really like this Mr Hash. Tickle the right senses my friend. Thank you. :)
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7th Jul 2014 2:14am
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8th Jul 2014 00:55am
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Anonymous
7th Jul 2014 11:51am
that sums it up powerfully..deception and betrayal are two things I have the most trouble dealing with. I feel the sense of loss and pain in this. Nice ink, my friend :)
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8th Jul 2014 1:06am
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7th Jul 2014 4:42pm
deception always leaves it's mark long after the person in question is long gone.. great ink Hash.. with love Crim
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7th Jul 2014 7:55pm
Deception hurts so much in the moment of passion because we expand our egos to include that significant other. When that happens our egos or sense of self or our walls collapse. That deception is akin to our sense of self being shattered.
Other than that great write, a lot of expression packed into a minimal amount if words
Other than that great write, a lot of expression packed into a minimal amount if words
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8th Jul 2014 1:08am
Re: Deception
7th Jul 2014 10:35pm
You can forgive and forget a lot
deception is not among those items.
The wolf calls ... what an image.
Love it!
deception is not among those items.
The wolf calls ... what an image.
Love it!
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8th Jul 2014 1:10am
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8th Jul 2014 8:03am
I understood the awoooooooooooooooo perfectly without the translation :-), hehe ...
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22nd Jul 2014 5:41pm
Beautifully tragic! Some things we have to let go.
Thank you for sharing. :)
Thank you for sharing. :)
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