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outsider

As I walk into the room
There are poeple all around
As they talk among themselves
I am pushed off to the corner
Do they hear me when I talk?
Do they notice when I am there?
Can they see my silent tears?
.........The anwser is no
I am invisible to them
As they walk past
Its like, I'm not even there
Everyday its the same shit over again
Sometimes I wonder if its worth living for
Will they notice if I'm gone?
Will they care?
Will they be glad?
I try to think somebody will care
But as the day goes by
I may be wrong
They won't care or will even notice
I am truly an outsider
Should I live or die?
I guess we will find out soon.

Written by screams4you

Published 29th Jun 2014

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Re: outsider

Anonymous

30th Jun 2014 00:45am

They will care, screams, I can assure you. I hear you but also, without even knowing you, I think you have a lot to say, otherwise you wouldn't be writing on here for a start.

I think you should get involved, don't let them walk past you. You have opinions, you tell them about your perspective or take on stuff.

If it can lift you, maybe you'd like to read my 'Back To The Basics' poem. The ending feels really positive to me, hope you'll feel that too. Take care.