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Allow Me
I have been where you are or once were
The sun shines more from where I stand
I would rather not stand alone
and I chose you
Refuse me and you will learn fast
I will not go away silently
I can show you how to smile again
I bring music, booze and even condoms
I know how to show you a great time
I wont even require a call tomorrow
However, you will feel at ease and even be able to sleep
Our bodies twisted in all the craziness
I saw you turn off your phone when you closed your eyes
The sun shines more from where I stand
I would rather not stand alone
and I chose you
Refuse me and you will learn fast
I will not go away silently
I can show you how to smile again
I bring music, booze and even condoms
I know how to show you a great time
I wont even require a call tomorrow
However, you will feel at ease and even be able to sleep
Our bodies twisted in all the craziness
I saw you turn off your phone when you closed your eyes
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Re: Allow Me
28th Jun 2014 4:01am
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28th Jun 2014 4:04am
Re: Allow Me
28th Jun 2014 5:34am
Re: Allow Me
30th Jun 2014 3:04am
"I will not go away silently "
there is something about this lines that connect the whole poem...very seductive also!
and the touch of a dominatrix makes it perfect...
there is something about this lines that connect the whole poem...very seductive also!
and the touch of a dominatrix makes it perfect...
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re: Re: Allow Me
2nd Jul 2014 2:32am
Re: Allow Me
Anonymous
8th Jul 2014 4:37am
I find this one a somehow peaceful read, also hopeful as well, great write.
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re: Re: Allow Me
11th Jul 2014 1:02am
Re: Allow Me
21st Jul 2014 9:57pm
Determined to get what she wants. Enticing and teasing to allure. Good write. Enjoyed mysteriouslady.
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re: Re: Allow Me
23rd Jul 2014 2:18am
Thanks a lot deary. :) Happy you liked it. Enticement I feel is a lost art form these days...
Re: Allow Me
16th Nov 2014 3:37am
beckoning w/a scarlet tipped finger, softly shaded eyes, & a heart patched w/fortitude & chance.
glad I found this...
glad I found this...
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re: Re: Allow Me
17th Nov 2014 7:26pm