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not as powerful as you think, then...
you are a train,
dependent upon
the lines on
which you run...
you are a train,
with no control
over your
destination...
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Re: not as powerful as you think, then...
25th Jun 2014 4:34pm
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25th Jun 2014 10:22pm
Re: not as powerful as you think, then...
25th Jun 2014 4:57pm
We choose our path of destination where death awaits us, regardless. With regard, Paul, always a wise thought.
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re: Re: not as powerful as you think, then...
25th Jun 2014 10:25pm
Re: not as powerful as you think, then...
25th Jun 2014 9:49pm
Trains are great, whooshing by, going on and on... But sometimes there's a switch up ahead. Thanks for the droppings...
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re: Re: not as powerful as you think, then...
25th Jun 2014 10:30pm
trains are great, I think so,
too...but they're often described
as "powerful", which is only a
part of the story... thank you
for taking the time..:)
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25th Jun 2014 11:25pm
Re: not as powerful as you think, then...
25th Jun 2014 11:13pm
That's a frightening thought, Paul, to be not in control of our journey of life, to follow predestined lines. But maybe it's just like that. Your mind has a way of it's own, I'm sure about that.
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re: Re: not as powerful as you think, then...
25th Jun 2014 11:30pm
just a passing thought, but if you
can't choose where to begin, how
can we pick where we end...
to continue the railway analogy:
if as a train you're put to work on
the London to Brighton line, you're
never going to end up in Liverpool,
no matter how much you might
want to...:)
can't choose where to begin, how
can we pick where we end...
to continue the railway analogy:
if as a train you're put to work on
the London to Brighton line, you're
never going to end up in Liverpool,
no matter how much you might
want to...:)
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25th Jun 2014 11:55pm
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26th Jun 2014 00:04am
Oh no you're not, I read your
poems, remember...you've many
trains of thought..:)
poems, remember...you've many
trains of thought..:)
Re: not as powerful as you think, then...
26th Jun 2014 1:10am
Sometimes a derailment is the best thing for change... like this piece x
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26th Jun 2014 1:35am
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26th Jun 2014 1:36am
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26th Jun 2014 1:40am