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Losing you
The moment where my feelings went at a all time low.
The heartless moment shocked me, made me shut down for a while.
The careless words you said to me. They were so blunt, so cold, that i couldn't beleive that it was coming from the one person that wouldn't be that crucial to me.
I'm not afraid to admit that you had me attached to everything you did, but the dream is over. Have to get back to reality. I wasn't ready to let go. Dosen' t matter anymore does it?
The heartless moment shocked me, made me shut down for a while.
The careless words you said to me. They were so blunt, so cold, that i couldn't beleive that it was coming from the one person that wouldn't be that crucial to me.
I'm not afraid to admit that you had me attached to everything you did, but the dream is over. Have to get back to reality. I wasn't ready to let go. Dosen' t matter anymore does it?
Published 21st Jun 2014
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- Edited 12th Apr 2023 9:45pm
21st Jun 2014 12:36pm
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21st Jun 2014 2:22pm
Anonymous
23rd Jun 2014 2:52am
I can almost feel your pain of loss here. It's quite raw the way you've approached this one. There was obviously a lot of heartache but it won't last forever as hopefully your defence mechanisms kick in.
