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Advent of an Adjective
He, like a cooling ember.
Me, like morning fog
burning off/
getting off.
The syncrasy
was effortless
and chemistry,
timeless.
As for my
journey down
his everything;
I sink until I
can't breath,
until he can't breath.
Before I quite
on our exhale,
together we die
and oh we die,
again
and again
and again.
Creating our
own vernacular
with our lips.
If he is lust
manifest,
I am love
womanifest.
Me, like morning fog
burning off/
getting off.
The syncrasy
was effortless
and chemistry,
timeless.
As for my
journey down
his everything;
I sink until I
can't breath,
until he can't breath.
Before I quite
on our exhale,
together we die
and oh we die,
again
and again
and again.
Creating our
own vernacular
with our lips.
If he is lust
manifest,
I am love
womanifest.
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Re: Advent of an Adjective
20th Jun 2014 5:46pm
re: Re: Advent of an Adjective
20th Jun 2014 5:47pm
Re: Advent of an Adjective
20th Jun 2014 5:48pm
This is amazing. I love how you're able to mesh our words into something beautiful.
Perfect duality.
I'd quote my favorite part but I loved all of it.
Your a great writer. End of story.
Perfect duality.
I'd quote my favorite part but I loved all of it.
Your a great writer. End of story.
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re: Re: Advent of an Adjective
20th Jun 2014 5:49pm
Re: Advent of an Adjective
21st Jun 2014 00:24am
I never even realized we were THAT good together!
Lmao yea I know, in my dreams! lol
Awesomely inked lady :)
Lmao yea I know, in my dreams! lol
Awesomely inked lady :)
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21st Jun 2014 1:08am
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22nd Jun 2014 8:57am
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Re: Advent of an Adjective
25th Jun 2014 5:55am
repeat of the ecstasy, when lovers can't get enough. romantic & sensual...
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25th Jun 2014 1:49pm
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Anonymous
26th Jun 2014 10:25am
Like. Slick.
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Re: Advent of an Adjective
26th Jun 2014 4:57pm