Mania

i enjoyed the visceral nature of the first 4 stanzas very much

especially the way it opens, I have a fear of heigths and the imagery of a twisted elevator makes my stomach spin

I'm so weary of writing
Though I can't keep it pent in
I need to bleed out my words of insanity
This is really good, the entire poem is good but my favorite part was those few lines.
Very well done can't wait to read more

I like it all, though I agree with the last two on favorite parts. The picture is beautiful! I'm in the process of drawing an eye for an art project that looks somewhat like that. :]

Thank you all for the read and taking the time to comment..it's much appreciated..peace Crimsin

Cori I think it's cool that your an artist as well..I bet your wicked..peace Crim

Hardly an artist. More of an art "appreciator". I'll be sure to send a picture of the eye to you when it's finished, though. :]

I would love to see it being an art lover myself..peace Crim :)

"Demented thoughts put on paper
Anxiety so painful I pace
Energy that is combustible"

I feel you definitely captured certain aspects of mania. I think you should hold onto this poem and work on it some more, take it to some more places.

thank you for your advise and comments..I will see if I can work it more in the future..peace Crimsin :)

I enjoyed your description of Mania and its harsher side, the relentless but sapping side. Maybe you should try the relentless energy-filling side, no?

yes mania filled energy can inspire beauty as well and the energy highs are great..thank you for the comment and advise..peace Crim :)

I literally love this poem. Its so deep. disturbing. dark. and haunting. But I've been in your place and it speaks to me!! Great Work Crimsin!!

Thank you very much for your gracious comments on this poem..peace Crim :)

if i may say so it was beautiful