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Stiffs on the Highway
gruesome find the road kill
half in half out of the ditch
smashed to bits who did that
look quite arty
don't you think
have a swill of this brew
the rock fire on my tummy
hey give me more heat me
I need the firewater
to erase that sight
the only lay for many miles more
cheap as they come, tho overused
hey ho hey ho hit that whore
with a thin rope
and an IOU
we got to go where
this ride brings us
to the devil's lair
or the empty house
nothing is waiting there
such company.
half in half out of the ditch
smashed to bits who did that
look quite arty
don't you think
have a swill of this brew
the rock fire on my tummy
hey give me more heat me
I need the firewater
to erase that sight
the only lay for many miles more
cheap as they come, tho overused
hey ho hey ho hit that whore
with a thin rope
and an IOU
we got to go where
this ride brings us
to the devil's lair
or the empty house
nothing is waiting there
such company.
Published 15th Jun 2014
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Anonymous
15th Jun 2014 2:04pm
I'm not used to such a dark piece from you..but it is nicely penned and a good read.
You write well either way, that this is "observational" makes it even better
You write well either way, that this is "observational" makes it even better
15th Jun 2014 2:07pm
Thanks Miki. I just had this vision of two men on the road, with beer cans on their hands and laughing like loons. Had to write that out of my head. Its like that sometimes.:))
Anonymous
15th Jun 2014 2:13pm
I know how that goes..nicely done :-)
15th Jun 2014 2:42pm
This orneriness made me chuckle Dear Grace :D
Dark indeed-with a grin :)
Dark indeed-with a grin :)
15th Jun 2014 3:03pm
