deepundergroundpoetry.com

what went wrong

 
Along with the fantasies that are part of childhood
What went wrong, I do hope laying down my thoughts
And experiances, weather it be in poetic form or just
Stripped to the bone writing, will hopefully make a
Positive contrabution, to a better understanding of
the problem people like me, face, I have no hesitation
In placing myself, amongst those people
People often say to me, well at least you have your
Writing, this comment is far to simplistic a view, it
Would be far more realistic, to say, my writings are
A real enditement of a flawed society, not catering
To vunerable peoples needs, from old people being
Left on the care home floor, soaked in their own shit
And piss, to a mental patient being tied to a chair
Or strapped to a bed, this is no cure, its barbaric
And tragic, crimes have been commited on me, whilst
In so called, safe institutions, I barley survived, both
Phisically and mentally, degraded, stripped of all my dignity
Forced to watch, people in the bed next to me, die a slow
and painful death, all in the name of ignorance, and a
Society that no longer gives a fuck
Written by bluebell
Published
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 3 reading list entries 0
comments 5 reads 707
Commenting Preference: 
The author is looking for friendly feedback.

Latest Forum Discussions
SPEAKEASY
Today 9:39pm by Josh
COMPETITIONS
Today 7:53pm by lepperochan
POETRY
Today 6:54pm by James_A_Knight
SPEAKEASY
Today 6:33pm by SweetKittyCat5
SPEAKEASY
Today 6:03pm by SweetKittyCat5
WORKSHOP
Today 2:12pm by Ahavati