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"Truth"
Honesty is liberating
often harsh
sometimes brutal
and more precious than gold
It begins with oneself
then spreads as we speak
it and nothing else
in every situation, regardless
Some place great value in this treasure
while others pretend, unable to accept it in full
they choose to deny, deceive
tarnish its luster
Having not the desire nor capacity
to navigate the harshness of reality
taking a crooked path of deception
forsaking the straits of candor
where genuine, personal wealth resides
Disagree or deflect if you wish
Deceit is the slag
Denial, the rooted impurity
most difficult to remove
The truth is incontrovertible
Smelted with character
Purified by practice
Most precious of all
*June 12, 2014*
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12th Jun 2014 8:51pm
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12th Jun 2014 10:55pm
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12th Jun 2014 11:54pm
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12th Jun 2014 11:57pm
The second round is on you, ms d. :)
All these free drinks, now I understand how gals 'go out' with no money. :D
All these free drinks, now I understand how gals 'go out' with no money. :D
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13th Jun 2014 7:00am
kind Sir, i will have you know that i have never paid for my own drinks... don't plan on starting now
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13th Jun 2014 7:24am
Wait! Let me act shocked. Okay, okay. I got it.
This is my surprised face ... :-0
This is my surprised face ... :-0
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12th Jun 2014 9:14pm
...yes sir, tell the truth so it can become a part of your past, instead of lying, screwing up your future. This one is a keeper! Love it! Xo
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Ms Rain, your words add true depth to this piece.
Appreciate the love. And, loving your new avatar.
Honored to be among those on your RL.
Thank you.
XO
Appreciate the love. And, loving your new avatar.
Honored to be among those on your RL.
Thank you.
XO
Re: "Truth"
12th Jun 2014 10:57pm
Mr .VP... very well put my friend...
"Having not the desire nor capacity
to navigate the harshness of reality
taking a crooked path of deception
forsaking the straits of candor
where genuine, personal wealth resides"
love it all.. but these lines I really feel...
much respect..throw'n the $ dear friend..xoxo domore
"Having not the desire nor capacity
to navigate the harshness of reality
taking a crooked path of deception
forsaking the straits of candor
where genuine, personal wealth resides"
love it all.. but these lines I really feel...
much respect..throw'n the $ dear friend..xoxo domore
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13th Jun 2014 00:08am
Ms D, your remarks are always met with gratitude.
Feeling the love, and pleased to see certain lines speak directly to you.
You continue to throw, my ego does grow, a dangerous notion. :)
Thank you.
XO
Feeling the love, and pleased to see certain lines speak directly to you.
You continue to throw, my ego does grow, a dangerous notion. :)
Thank you.
XO
Re: "Truth"
13th Jun 2014 1:13am
I felt like I was reading my own thoughts. Beautiful.
Thank you for the welcome.
Thank you for the welcome.
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13th Jun 2014 5:02am
Thank you for sharing such kind words, Renee.
Nice to know this connects with you.
Nice to know this connects with you.
Re: "Truth"
13th Jun 2014 4:06am
Sweet EV......written with convicting wisdom to my soul. Enjoyed it all. I too raise a toast......bottoms up. Xo :)
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13th Jun 2014 5:08am
ES, pleased to know you enjoyed it.
The third round is on you, Sweetness. :)
I could really get accustomed to the free drinks. :D
XO
The third round is on you, Sweetness. :)
I could really get accustomed to the free drinks. :D
XO
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13th Jun 2014 6:49am
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13th Jun 2014 7:28am
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, ms nikki.
Pleasure to know you dig it.
Pleasure to know you dig it.
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13th Jun 2014 5:51pm
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