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True Love A Metaphor
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I breathe in your fragrance and it becomes nostalgic, like a myth from a story book, I will bottle and bury it deep within my heart forever and always. Unmistakably, undeniably an undoubtedly
I love you, and as such is beyond contestation.
As if a prophecy of Ill-fated love had been foretold to me
I drop down to my knees helpless and begin to weep. I know you are leaving me, as many before you have done, never to return until you are lifeless, until your body lay dead at my feet.
I whisper into his ear softly do not forget me, then tell him to take this and keep it safe. I place something wet into his outstretched hand and walk away. Innocently he uncurls his fingers and looks down to find a blood-filled stain in the palm of his hand.
Now frightened and lost for words, he looks away for a few moments then starts to cry, streaks of fear now scar his cheeks. Bewildered he wipes his face while walking back to my side and asks, my love …? I wipe the tears from my eyes and say, you have been granted the greatest gift of all, a piece of my heart for all of eternity, remember me my love, remember always.
I breathe in your fragrance and it becomes nostalgic, like a myth from a story book, I will bottle and bury it deep within my heart forever and always. Unmistakably, undeniably an undoubtedly
I love you, and as such is beyond contestation.
As if a prophecy of Ill-fated love had been foretold to me
I drop down to my knees helpless and begin to weep. I know you are leaving me, as many before you have done, never to return until you are lifeless, until your body lay dead at my feet.
I whisper into his ear softly do not forget me, then tell him to take this and keep it safe. I place something wet into his outstretched hand and walk away. Innocently he uncurls his fingers and looks down to find a blood-filled stain in the palm of his hand.
Now frightened and lost for words, he looks away for a few moments then starts to cry, streaks of fear now scar his cheeks. Bewildered he wipes his face while walking back to my side and asks, my love …? I wipe the tears from my eyes and say, you have been granted the greatest gift of all, a piece of my heart for all of eternity, remember me my love, remember always.
Written by
Zazzles
(Broomie)
Published 11th Jun 2014
| Edited 22nd Jan 2025
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Re: True Love A Methphore
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11th Jun 2014 8:22pm
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11th Jun 2014 11:22pm
Wow Broom! These older poems of yours are incredible! I hope you're thinking about arranging them in a book! They should be in print! :) Love this! Xo
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12th Jun 2014 00:08am
Why thank you MaLady! I actually had these posted the last time I was a member here, I guess it/they got caught in the shuffle unnoticed ?
Glad you liked "D
Ha a book thanks but not hardly, I am nowhere ready to write a book, I am not that good.
luvs you mooocho!
Broomie
Glad you liked "D
Ha a book thanks but not hardly, I am nowhere ready to write a book, I am not that good.
luvs you mooocho!
Broomie
Re: True Love A Methphore
12th Jun 2014 00:19am
Beautiful and touching Dear Broomie!!!
The meter of this flows, rolling along and touches down gently by the end-Lovely Depth!!!
The meter of this flows, rolling along and touches down gently by the end-Lovely Depth!!!
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12th Jun 2014 00:34am
Thank you kind Sir "D I remember when I wrote that
I cried!!! lol how corny am I, ugh!! ")
love you Gabe))))))))))))
Jackie
I cried!!! lol how corny am I, ugh!! ")
love you Gabe))))))))))))
Jackie
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12th Jun 2014 00:42am
That's not corny Jackie...That's Truth which equals depth-I Love You too Broomie!!!
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12th Jun 2014 9:03pm
A very touching piece Broom...well done I liked it a lot especially these lines
"you have been granted the greatest gift of all,
a piece of my heart, for all of eternity.
Remember me my love,
remember me always..."
"you have been granted the greatest gift of all,
a piece of my heart, for all of eternity.
Remember me my love,
remember me always..."
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re: Re: True Love A Methphore
12th Jun 2014 9:54pm
Always a pleasure to see you in my poetic corner Jess :) Thanks for the read..
Cheers
Jackie
Cheers
Jackie
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22nd Jun 2014 5:31am
Thank you Dnikki, nice to meet you aad thanks for the read,I appreciate your thoughts.
Cheers
Broom
Cheers
Broom
Re: True Love A Methphore
14th Sep 2014 7:45pm
That's a very touching piece. It touches the soul and makes you appreciate the love you have now stored in your heart. Great write Jackie.
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13th Feb 2016 2:54am
Hi HW, what a nice surprise
to see you😊
Thank U for reading from me..
Zazzles X
to see you😊
Thank U for reading from me..
Zazzles X
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- Edited 8th Nov 2018 00:49am
10th Oct 2018 2:17am
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