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This boy's budget is tight
So I reside indoors on this night
My favorite poets are out living their lives
The devil in me would capture them
Force them to write
I present you with ink, quill and scroll
Fill my empty cup with drops of the soul
So that I may languish each spiraling ripple
Bear everything for me
That I may suckle your sweet nipple
Spawn something truly exquisite
Save yourself enslavement of a most sadistic visit
Whats it going to take to shake you from sober days
Bite into your neck with my passion
Fucking you savagely until it stirs you deeply from malaise
Published 27th Mar 2011
| Edited 28th Mar 2011
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27th Mar 2011 2:09am
I love this poem..Spawn something truly exqusite..save yourself elsavement of a most sadistic visit..Whats it going to take to shake you from sober days..Bite into your neck passionately..Fuck you so savage it stirs you deeply from malaise..end quote so dark and lovely..peace Crimsin
27th Mar 2011 2:18am
Thanks for the read Crimsin
This piece made your reading list, now that is truly exquisite ;)
This piece made your reading list, now that is truly exquisite ;)
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Mar 2011 2:41am
27th Mar 2011 2:38am
As someone whose favourite writers are usually dead old men and women, I know the pain this poem expresses all too well. Charmingly erotic, disturbingly true.
27th Mar 2011 2:52am
27th Mar 2011 2:58am
This poem could be the summarized version of a classic tale to be. Though you've summed it up so well. It just brings so many images to mind and you began it so perfectly!
27th Mar 2011 9:06pm
An extremely savage, twisted and exquisite piece. The imagery drips with vigour and sadism.
Anonymous
28th Mar 2011 10:38am
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