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Intertwined
We poets are intertwined
We drink from the same communal pool of thought
Inspiring giving our very essence
All to feed the fire that is passion
Like moths to a flame
Our muse beats out our rhythm
Bringining us to heights
Unobtainable without each other
We are the host of creative thinking
Each of us drinking out of this pool sometimes without even thinking
The waters of thought are warm, inviting
So inticing to be intertwined on this vine
Keeping thought pregnant
All desires ripe for the picking
Passion feeds us
Without it nothing
Intertwined and ever so grateful
For this interwoven existence.
We drink from the same communal pool of thought
Inspiring giving our very essence
All to feed the fire that is passion
Like moths to a flame
Our muse beats out our rhythm
Bringining us to heights
Unobtainable without each other
We are the host of creative thinking
Each of us drinking out of this pool sometimes without even thinking
The waters of thought are warm, inviting
So inticing to be intertwined on this vine
Keeping thought pregnant
All desires ripe for the picking
Passion feeds us
Without it nothing
Intertwined and ever so grateful
For this interwoven existence.
Published 26th Mar 2011
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Anonymous
26th Mar 2011 3:24am
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We are all unique true but I believe we inspire each other taking our voices higher..Something inspires each of us lust,violence,anger,imagination
This is what I mean by communal thought not to steal from anyones glory but something in the ether inspires each story
This is what I mean by communal thought not to steal from anyones glory but something in the ether inspires each story
Anonymous
26th Mar 2011 8:36pm
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Anonymous
26th Mar 2011 3:42am
that poets are intertwined more than individual. Without each other, we wouldn't be able to feed off of each other's ideas.
Lovely poem, as always. :]
Lovely poem, as always. :]
26th Mar 2011 3:47am
Thank you for understanding Cori..poets like you inspire me to keep writing..give me idea's push me to my limits..hope you are having a great evening..peace Crim :)
26th Mar 2011 4:01am
Beautiful poem, i love the buddhist soul that suddle mystifies these waters
26th Mar 2011 4:08am
thank you I love your poems..I am inspired by poets like you..peace Crimsin :)
26th Mar 2011 5:55am
A friend of mine, Cody, once gave a whole...Not lecture.. But a Master Question of sorts for a discussion. It described a giant pool of thought, of all the collective knowledge of all people, ever. And that some people are more prone to tapping into this massive reservoir of knowledge, whether through meditation, or just pure luck. It intrigued me, and this seems to show the same quality, the same basic philosophy.
26th Mar 2011 8:45pm
Thank you for getting my poem..and taking the time to comment..peace Crimsin :)
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