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Caramel & Strawberries
I spread em wide
do you wanna slide..?
Yo tongue down my lips
as i grind my hips..
Whisper to my honeycomb It's mystical chant
Mmm you gettin' excited, i see it through your denim pant.
Can I ride yo face as i struggle to stay in place?
Pull me close as I wiggle & run it's almost a chase.
Hold tight now squeeze & grab,
listen to my gasps as your fingers stab
..into my flesh penetrating the mesh..
How much you want more or less?
This 'Pain & Pleasure' is quite aggressive
i can almost see myself your mouth is so reflective.
Lost control? I already knew you did
Your echo from my body became lucid!
do you wanna slide..?
Yo tongue down my lips
as i grind my hips..
Whisper to my honeycomb It's mystical chant
Mmm you gettin' excited, i see it through your denim pant.
Can I ride yo face as i struggle to stay in place?
Pull me close as I wiggle & run it's almost a chase.
Hold tight now squeeze & grab,
listen to my gasps as your fingers stab
..into my flesh penetrating the mesh..
How much you want more or less?
This 'Pain & Pleasure' is quite aggressive
i can almost see myself your mouth is so reflective.
Lost control? I already knew you did
Your echo from my body became lucid!
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Re: Caramel & Strawberries
2nd Jun 2014 8:32pm
For some reason, the rapper Lil' Kim came to mind while reading this. Kinda' felt like the flow and content was edgy and confident! Last line was cool, Honey! Xo
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re: Re: Caramel & Strawberries
3rd Jun 2014 6:19am
Hahah Niiceee, I used to love her music, now I can't handle it! Well Thank You so much as always Rain. =)
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3rd Jun 2014 00:51am
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3rd Jun 2014 6:20am
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4th Jun 2014 1:37pm
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6th Jun 2014 4:12am
Re: Caramel & Strawberries
4th Jun 2014 4:37pm
Mmmmmm hell yea!! Caramel, Strawberries n Woman flesh!!?? Delectable beyond definition! lol
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re: Re: Caramel & Strawberries
6th Jun 2014 4:14am
Hahah pleased you seem to have enjoyed=)! Yes indeed, the ingredients for this poem..Thank You!!!
Re: Caramel & Strawberries
".....For some reason, the rapper Lil' Kim came to mind while reading this. Kinda' felt like the flow and content was edgy and confident..."
Kinda' cosigning Mistress Rain although I'm feeling a little more Nikki Manaj right here and now ; ) (....those damned Caramel and Strawberries do it everytime)
Edgy², Sweet Pimpstress !
Kinda' cosigning Mistress Rain although I'm feeling a little more Nikki Manaj right here and now ; ) (....those damned Caramel and Strawberries do it everytime)
Edgy², Sweet Pimpstress !
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re: Re: Caramel & Strawberries
6th Jun 2014 5:23am
Hahah i see, maybe i should try rapping as a way to express my poetry!
Indeed, Thank You for stopping by..Ooo Sweet Pimpstress i like that;D!
Indeed, Thank You for stopping by..Ooo Sweet Pimpstress i like that;D!
Re: Caramel & Strawberries
6th Jun 2014 4:37pm
Nicely Done... Love this "Can I ride yo face as I struggle to stay in place"... <3
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14th Jun 2014 4:26am
Re: Caramel & Strawberries
6th Jun 2014 8:16pm
I kinda drooled reading this hot piece sweets!!
See I'm smiling!!LOL!!
Awesome ink Divinity!!!
I'm still a Great fan!!
Sir Lancelott
See I'm smiling!!LOL!!
Awesome ink Divinity!!!
I'm still a Great fan!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: Caramel & Strawberries
14th Jun 2014 4:28am
Lmaoo Aww dammnn! I got you drooling? Am i making some Erotic improvement? Haha happy to bring a smile!
Thank you ever more for the support Lance:D!
Thank you ever more for the support Lance:D!
Re: Caramel & Strawberries
4th Jul 2014 10:40am
Very erotic and also sweet.
It's very ' set the mood' type of poem, I love it! :D
It's very ' set the mood' type of poem, I love it! :D
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Re. Caramel & Strawberries
7th Jan 2016 9:19am