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I want....
I want to wake to the music of rain on the roof and distant rolling thunder
The light blinking on alarm across the darkened room, proving a storm had come in my slumber.
The ceiling fan making a soft repetitive sound as it gently swirls above and cools me.
I want my every sense to be slowly awakened to you laying in tranquility beside me
On my back with you curled into me, on me, tangled and cradling me.
As if, even in sleep your protective nature bids you to hold me close to your heart
The feel of the soft hairs on your legs, lightly touching, tickling my smoothness
Your hand resting gently at my waist, your fingers splayed across the hollow between my hips
Your breath warm and steady brushing my neck, causing slight goose bumps on my skin
The rhythmic tempo of your chest as you inhale and exhale, caressing into me
I want to savor the moments of your quiet repose and drink in the sight of you
I want to feel the heat spread from your body into my coolness, warming me a little at a time
Stirring my blood and igniting a low burning fire at my center, that rises and spreads
I want to shift my body into yours, pressing my chest against yours, breath for breath
Reach down and stroke your sleeping ego, gently bite your shoulder to taste the salt of your skin
Feel your passions rise beneath my hand, your body awakening to mine.
I want to feel your arms tighten around me pulling me deeper into the moment
Hands in my hair and your teeth grazing my neck as you tug my hair in passion’s embrace
Thrumming in my ears, and soaking into my skin, elicit whispers and wishes to be fulfilled.
I want to block out the sound of distant thunder with the sound of your heart beating with mine.
The harmonic ethereal sound of two souls coming together as one..
The light blinking on alarm across the darkened room, proving a storm had come in my slumber.
The ceiling fan making a soft repetitive sound as it gently swirls above and cools me.
I want my every sense to be slowly awakened to you laying in tranquility beside me
On my back with you curled into me, on me, tangled and cradling me.
As if, even in sleep your protective nature bids you to hold me close to your heart
The feel of the soft hairs on your legs, lightly touching, tickling my smoothness
Your hand resting gently at my waist, your fingers splayed across the hollow between my hips
Your breath warm and steady brushing my neck, causing slight goose bumps on my skin
The rhythmic tempo of your chest as you inhale and exhale, caressing into me
I want to savor the moments of your quiet repose and drink in the sight of you
I want to feel the heat spread from your body into my coolness, warming me a little at a time
Stirring my blood and igniting a low burning fire at my center, that rises and spreads
I want to shift my body into yours, pressing my chest against yours, breath for breath
Reach down and stroke your sleeping ego, gently bite your shoulder to taste the salt of your skin
Feel your passions rise beneath my hand, your body awakening to mine.
I want to feel your arms tighten around me pulling me deeper into the moment
Hands in my hair and your teeth grazing my neck as you tug my hair in passion’s embrace
Thrumming in my ears, and soaking into my skin, elicit whispers and wishes to be fulfilled.
I want to block out the sound of distant thunder with the sound of your heart beating with mine.
The harmonic ethereal sound of two souls coming together as one..
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Re: I want....
2nd Jun 2014 9:08pm
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3rd Jun 2014 1:40am
Thank you demonspread66...I appreciate your kind comment..and it pleases me greatly that this evoked images in your mind..Honored that this has found a home within your RL... with respect..domore
Re: I want....
2nd Jun 2014 9:56pm
Divine moments at the grasping finger tips
the godly appeal of want
to feel alive, strive for something more
to feel the rapture of want colliding with skin, passion drips from corners of witness, pools of the heart joining in a kiss
Beautiful write Domore, Want is a under estimated emotion.
the godly appeal of want
to feel alive, strive for something more
to feel the rapture of want colliding with skin, passion drips from corners of witness, pools of the heart joining in a kiss
Beautiful write Domore, Want is a under estimated emotion.
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3rd Jun 2014 1:57am
Awakened... your words always move me in a way that I can't explain, but relish when I read...Thank you ever so much for your gracious comment.. I am deeply touched that this has found it's way upon your RL.. with deepest respect..domore
Re: I want....
2nd Jun 2014 10:59pm
I want ...
this poem to never end.
A passionate and tender write, domore, so very intense. Much enjoyed!
this poem to never end.
A passionate and tender write, domore, so very intense. Much enjoyed!
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re: Re: I want....
3rd Jun 2014 2:00am
Lovely Miss Chi... I am giddy that you stopped by my little space to read and comment :) Thank you for your wonderful comment... it is sincerely appreciated... with much respect..xoxo domore
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3rd Jun 2014 00:10am
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3rd Jun 2014 2:02am
Thank you ifsheonlyknew... your comment leaves me blushing :) love that you loved it!! with respect..domore
Re: I want....
3rd Jun 2014 1:53am
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3rd Jun 2014 2:04am
Muah!! Sir Poet.. you deserve kisses for that kind comment.. If that is my name.. it is only to those that read and see that within my writes.. I am honored that you see and feel that :) with much love and respect..domore
Re: I want....
3rd Jun 2014 1:58am
"I want my every sense to be slowly
awakened to you laying in tranquility
beside me On my back with you curled into me,
on me, tangled and cradling me.
As if, even in sleep your protective
nature bids you to hold me close to your heart"
i agree with Miss Chi, this serenity should stretch into eternity. i enjoyed this immensely, beautiful domore.
awakened to you laying in tranquility
beside me On my back with you curled into me,
on me, tangled and cradling me.
As if, even in sleep your protective
nature bids you to hold me close to your heart"
i agree with Miss Chi, this serenity should stretch into eternity. i enjoyed this immensely, beautiful domore.
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re: Re: I want....
3rd Jun 2014 2:08am
Lovely kat...I am speechless from your lovely comment..I am so thrilled that you enjoyed this..you honor me each time you read and comment. I value your thoughts and am in awe of the poems you share here on DU--such talent!!..with love and respect..xoxo domore
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Anonymous
3rd Jun 2014 5:22am
Sweet Lady!! Oh yes!!! Beautiful harmony of souls meeting. Enjoyed this tune a lot. Mmmmmmmmmm! I'm sweating! LOL!! Xo :)
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re: Re: I want....
3rd Jun 2014 6:07am
Lovely Flower,,, I love that you could hear the lover's melody in this.. your words are always supportive to me..can not thank you enough.....now go get a fan and cool off my friend :):) LOL xoxo domore
Re: I want....
3rd Jun 2014 7:48am
Incredible imagery and excellent rhythm, Ms D. Your beautiful heart is revealed in many of these lines.
Throwing money. Large denominations! :)
Throwing money. Large denominations! :)
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re: Re: I want....
3rd Jun 2014 3:01pm
:) Thank you Mr VP :) you always so generous with my work...much appreciated my friend.... I'll be rolling to the bank with all that money!! :))
with love and respect..xoxo domore
with love and respect..xoxo domore
Re: I want....
3rd Jun 2014 2:54pm
Mmmmmmexquisite!! You couldn't have penned a better description of how I want to feel sweetheart, damn... :) excellent stuff
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re: Re: I want....
3rd Jun 2014 3:08pm
Ever appreciate you Mr Poe... :) I'm so glad you enjoyed :) you always make my day a little more sun-shiney with your taking the time to read what I write.. :) with respect..domore
Re: I want....
6th Jun 2014 3:13am
I really don't think there's enough words to describe the passion and eroticism you've put into this piece! Well done! I'm glad I've returned to see one of my favorite poets still going strong!
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6th Jun 2014 2:43pm
Wellll Mr DJ.. you've officially made my day with that comment.. very kind of you.. glad to see you back!! Look forward to reading some of your work! with love and respect..xoxo domore
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5th Jul 2014 7:13pm
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6th Jul 2014 5:42pm
Thank you Jack.. I honestly don't have the words to express my sincere gratitude for your comment..you leave me speechless with such eloquent accolades.. with much respect to you kind sir...domore
ps..every drop fills my cup, and yours has made it runneth over.. :)
ps..every drop fills my cup, and yours has made it runneth over.. :)