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Duties
Do not disturb left hanging
if only to be a fly on that wall they would say
Going about their cleaning duties
Thoughts about sex with their husbands later tonight
not theirs though as they bend and wait
before saying fuck me hard as he enters the room
afterwards he will say jeeez woman what got into you today
After the rare walk into twice in one night woods
And she would just smile that silent smile as he rolled over
exhausted
as she imagined that room
Bending over
Just do not disturb
if only to be a fly on that wall they would say
Going about their cleaning duties
Thoughts about sex with their husbands later tonight
not theirs though as they bend and wait
before saying fuck me hard as he enters the room
afterwards he will say jeeez woman what got into you today
After the rare walk into twice in one night woods
And she would just smile that silent smile as he rolled over
exhausted
as she imagined that room
Bending over
Just do not disturb
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re: Re: Duties
1st Jun 2014 7:03pm
Thankyou Whale xD
simple write as multitasking woman duties with making tea and television gawping
but thankyou for commenting :)
simple write as multitasking woman duties with making tea and television gawping
but thankyou for commenting :)
re: Re: Duties
1st Jun 2014 7:21pm
Thankyou Poe
was actually about cleaning maids in hotels
and the scenes the witness and the imaginations their minds create
i mean do not disturb during the day usually conjours up
many a naughty thought
but if you saw differently then I'm happy
good to get others thoughts xD
was actually about cleaning maids in hotels
and the scenes the witness and the imaginations their minds create
i mean do not disturb during the day usually conjours up
many a naughty thought
but if you saw differently then I'm happy
good to get others thoughts xD
Re: Duties
1st Jun 2014 9:18pm
Re: Duties
1st Jun 2014 10:33pm
reminds me of a scene in 'Polish Wedding': Lena Olin on her hands & knees scrubbing the men's room floor, her body swaying temptingly. one man watching her, & I was dreaming his dream...
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Re: Duties
2nd Jun 2014 00:36am
Re: Duties
2nd Jun 2014 1:03am
After the rare walk.....
into twice in
one night woods
do people practice
on maids
ere twice wood arises in succession
Do enlighten
many guys suffer from a complexion
will it stand
in fright
in a hotel
when maids are smiling for a return
to your woods
third time during the night
into twice in
one night woods
do people practice
on maids
ere twice wood arises in succession
Do enlighten
many guys suffer from a complexion
will it stand
in fright
in a hotel
when maids are smiling for a return
to your woods
third time during the night
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Re: Duties
Like JohnF I was reminded of a movie from this: Chocolat ... The scene where a housewife is dutifully scrubbing a tub on hands and knees but when her husband notices the motion of her backside ... It sparks his own labor of love ; )
Cool pen on how the ordinary becomes extraordinary ...
http://m.youtube.com/?#/watch?v=Az6q4ThqnrA (I was trying to link the trailer for the movie because it shows that scene)
Cool pen on how the ordinary becomes extraordinary ...
http://m.youtube.com/?#/watch?v=Az6q4ThqnrA (I was trying to link the trailer for the movie because it shows that scene)
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re: Re: Duties
2nd Jun 2014 1:15pm
Re: Duties
3rd Jun 2014 11:45am
Hhhhmmmm thoughts of husbands NOT theirs...
Very naughty lady! lol still that's how guys get lucky
thank goodness for those frisky women! lol
Like the ink my friend :)
Very naughty lady! lol still that's how guys get lucky
thank goodness for those frisky women! lol
Like the ink my friend :)
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re: Re: Duties
3rd Jun 2014 1:30pm