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This Kiss...........
...that I've never ever had before
it just won't let me go
oh, we talk for hours,
the hours that feel like only moments
from the piedmont to the gulf coast
sharing gray skies
dancing between transcendental showers
always left feeling like your body is right there......
...next to mine
and that kiss
refreshes my languid soul
like strawberries
and mangoes
watermelon
and honeydew
making me feel brand new....
…..that kiss that I've never had
it's essence leads me to
hugs unending
desire, mind-bending
memories of your
warm, moist lips
soft as the petals of your delicate lotus flower
the touch of your soft hand against my face
it draws tears from my eyes,
yielding words
my lips cannot speak
fueling the fire we make,
burning inside these
incendiary,
lusty
dreams
that I just can't seem to shake
…..lost
in a kiss
that has yet to find it's way
to my lips
from yours.....
....how long will love make me wait....?
Published 1st Jun 2014
| Edited 2nd Jun 2014
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1st Jun 2014 3:01am
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1st Jun 2014 4:34am
when nature and the elements, meshes with human behavior, then taps consciousness and adds food, you have a write which anyone can relate to!
1st Jun 2014 11:30am
1st Jun 2014 7:07am
I am sure with poetry like that you won't have to wait that much longer..... your poem has got me dreaming about that kiss of yours with my beloved --this is what kissing should feel like -- love this piece!!! ♡♡♡ :)
1st Jun 2014 11:29am
....thank you Scarlet. I am waiting in anticipation for that moist union of kindred souls : )
1st Jun 2014 11:14pm
I loved the beauty and intensity you’ve projected in this kiss; a soft sign of love that evoke much desire. A kiss that seems to baptize itself along moist lips, lubricated with caged passion.
It's intent, lovely...Xoxo
The last line seem to have a tone of frustration.....
It's intent, lovely...Xoxo
The last line seem to have a tone of frustration.....
"...I loved the beauty and intensity you’ve projected in this kiss; a soft sign of love that evoke much desire. A kiss that seems to baptize itself along moist lips, lubricated with caged passion.
It's intent, lovely...Xoxo
The last line seem to have a tone of frustration..... "
No frustration really. More like anxious anticipation....like a child wanting to open his presents on Christmas Eve hoping for that most perfect one : )
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PuBUUV4ea2g I want to do a male arrangement of this : )
It's intent, lovely...Xoxo
The last line seem to have a tone of frustration..... "
No frustration really. More like anxious anticipation....like a child wanting to open his presents on Christmas Eve hoping for that most perfect one : )
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PuBUUV4ea2g I want to do a male arrangement of this : )
2nd Jun 2014 5:35am
6th Jun 2014 9:19pm
Bro. M Please let me know when the album drops, Man that was Great!!
ALWAYS DO WHAT IT DO!!!
Fuckin' AWESOME!!!
Sir Lancelott
ALWAYS DO WHAT IT DO!!!
Fuckin' AWESOME!!!
Sir Lancelott
